Reviews for Nothing is Illuminated
Anon chapter 14 . 12/28/2013
This is great! You are very talented and I think you should write more.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/7/2013
I am so glad you've made this story! You are very talented and you have a great imagination! I hope you'll write more because... , not to be rude but you haven't update yet in a year! I really love this story and it made me cry for 3 times already (which idk why)
Guest chapter 14 . 10/25/2013
Please wright more of this story
Pandarosita chapter 8 . 6/13/2013
XD love this story! (Too lazy to sign in .) and I actually groaned out loud with the Aangst joke. Spare us the Sokka-Level jokes! XD jk I love them LOL
Misstress Minerva chapter 14 . 5/14/2013
Love the way this flows! Keep on writing! (When you have the time of course!) We appreciated so much :)
vienx.001 chapter 14 . 2/27/2013
next chapter please..
i really sad read this.. will they be together ? or stay juat friend ?
i hope u finish this.. update please..
thanks the story
Fruipit chapter 14 . 2/27/2013
I love your taste in music - really, it is that and the romantic-nonromance between her and Jin that got me really hooked. I hope you come back one day to finish it, because I'll be hear... waiting...
Guest chapter 14 . 1/1/2013
Just finished reading your whole story so far, and I got to say I LOVE! LOVE! LOVE IT! I hope you can finish the rest soon. The suspense is KILLING me! What's going to happen to Toph and Sokka now? After reading chapter 14, it looks as though they're kind of having an emotional affair. Will their relationship turn physical? Please continue with your story.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/28/2012
Great chapter! Great story in general that's very well written! Each chapter, Toph seems to mature more and more, and I can't wait to read what happens next. I'm sure you're really busy, but could you please write more chapters?
forever-and-always-dancing chapter 14 . 8/11/2012
I love this story so much! It's so creative, I would've never in a million years thought about Toph's belt chain thing, or the bridge. It also sticks really true to character; I feel like I'm watching them really play it out on Nickelodeon (excluding the fact that it's a kid show and they would never allow this stuff to happen but whatever) :) love it!
lover chapter 14 . 7/29/2012
just finished chapter 14 and again i have to say...
What a masterpice!

from what i understand, Toph evolved from a childish girl into a mature, understanding and wise teenager (i guess her age now is about 22 or 24?)

I feel sympathy towards Toph since she is still single in this fic up till now.
The wound from the past childish but true love really left a great scar in her heart...

Please let there be good soulmate and good ending in Toph's life...

Since this story is related to LoK, I can't wait to know who's gonna be Toph's husband...

And lastly, I want to say it again...WHAT A MASTERPIECE!

For God sake, please continue your writing...
lover chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
a perfect masterpiece...
the best fic for Toph so far...
In the name of God, I almost cry reading Chapter 2 and 3...
plz let there be a good partner and happy ending for Toph...
she's my favorite character...
(when i wrote this comment, i only read till chapter 3... cant wait to finish it,)
julia chapter 14 . 7/23/2012
but whaaat happens neeext? ;_;
A writer chapter 14 . 7/21/2012
These are good writings. Probably the best Tokka fanfic around, girl. Not bad at all.

You said you wanted some criticism, so I'll see what I can do-first of all, yes, as you way, your writing style is a touch flowery. Not that that's always a problem-some of it is very good-but I would say that isn't necessarily the Toph-iest narration one could come up with.
You were faithful to Toph's character, of course, and created a startlingly cool rendition of her. In general, everyone else makes since, except Zuko. When he appeared in your earlier chapters I didn't really feel his actions were believable. The scene where he comforts Toph would have made a lot more sense if, say, it had been Katara.
And you have some run-on scentences that read awkward if you're paying too much attention. But you know. It's the internet. They probably aren't.
All in all, you finally, of all the people, have begun to really take advantage of Toph's amazing character and explore the way she sees the world in a non-combat context. I hope I'm not commenting on a dead webpage and that this story will continue, maybe even to some resolution.
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 14 . 6/26/2012
FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS, omg this fic, i just can't...

these details are killing me, they are perfect.

i can't, i really can't wait to read more, i loved this fic too much.
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