Reviews for Tales of a Mary Sue
Chubbypanda10 chapter 7 . 8/17
Haii, I love your story, it was funny, and love the lesson in the end hahaha. I was so close to punching the screen when she broke Anabeth and Percy.. :D
Work Hard and Play Harder chapter 7 . 7/9
I never thought I'd say this, but you need worse grammar and language in this. But oh my gods was it funny.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/7
Grover is a Satyr, not a Centaur.
inspibrain101 chapter 7 . 4/19
Ho boy, rookie mistake: don't say you're better than the gods. Look how that went for Arachne!
Minerva Arhedes chapter 7 . 3/28
I love this thing, you have a really wry way of expressing your hatred for cliches and Mary Sues. I LOVE THE STORY!
I am a huntress of Artemis chapter 7 . 3/15
Well done! A lovely Sue bashing story and the best bit? SHE DIED! Wow I would not normally wish anyone to die but seriously that girl annoyed me.

- Huntress
I am a huntress of Artemis chapter 1 . 3/15
Yes! I love a good Sue bashing story :)

- Sue Bashing
- For the most part good punctuation
- Good Spelling

- It has a Sue bashing plot that is slightly overused but nevertheless very funny.

Overall: A good start that I am glad you are continuing :) Well done - Huntress
WeAreTheRisen chapter 4 . 1/15
*pukes* I completely get this... You have been hitting this spot-on!
WeAreTheRisen chapter 1 . 1/15
Oh. My. God. *showers you with love and adoration* FINALLY, I HAVE FOUND SOMEONE WHO DESPISES MARY SUES!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Thank you for writing this. I absolutely hate Mary Sues.
bookloveralltheway6 chapter 4 . 10/1/2014
Did you use the Mary Sue Litmus test to write this? It's hilarious! But the "everyone who hates me ends up dead, beaten, or in jail" is part of the litmus test.
Love Things That Go BOOM chapter 7 . 8/24/2014
That was horrible. I'll never regain my sanity. But at least Miranda died! Yay!
Love Things That Go BOOM chapter 4 . 8/24/2014
I like the idea of the story, just not the story. I hate Miranda. (That was a compliment.)
Love Things That Go BOOM chapter 2 . 8/24/2014
I'm hating Miranda already...
Moonstar Daughter of Hades chapter 7 . 8/10/2014
Applause. This story deserves applause. (It's not sarcasm, btw. I'm being serious. It's just kinda hard to use tone in the digital landscape)
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