Reviews for Tales of a Mary Sue
deleted75729 chapter 7 . 10/16/2015
"all of these readers would have their brain cells back" TRUE
deleted75729 chapter 6 . 10/16/2015
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
deleted75729 chapter 5 . 10/16/2015
WHY DID SHE BREAK UP TRATIE W H Y
deleted75729 chapter 4 . 10/16/2015
okay she stinks so much AND SHE CAN NOT BREAK UP TRATIE NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
deleted75729 chapter 3 . 10/16/2015
is it bad if i ship miranda with all three of them
deleted75729 chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
ughhhhh sooo entertaining
deleted75729 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
I LOVE MARY SUE STORIES
Chubbypanda10 chapter 7 . 8/17/2015
Haii, I love your story, it was funny, and love the lesson in the end hahaha. I was so close to punching the screen when she broke Anabeth and Percy.. :D
secrethouseofbooks chapter 7 . 7/9/2015
I never thought I'd say this, but you need worse grammar and language in this. But oh my gods was it funny.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/7/2015
Grover is a Satyr, not a Centaur.
inspibrain101 chapter 7 . 4/19/2015
Ho boy, rookie mistake: don't say you're better than the gods. Look how that went for Arachne!
Minerva Arhedes chapter 7 . 3/28/2015
I love this thing, you have a really wry way of expressing your hatred for cliches and Mary Sues. I LOVE THE STORY!
Cats12 chapter 7 . 3/15/2015
Well done! A lovely Sue bashing story and the best bit? SHE DIED! Wow I would not normally wish anyone to die but seriously that girl annoyed me.

- Huntress
Cats12 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Yes! I love a good Sue bashing story :)

Pros:
- Sue Bashing
- For the most part good punctuation
- Good Spelling

Cons:
- It has a Sue bashing plot that is slightly overused but nevertheless very funny.

Overall: A good start that I am glad you are continuing :) Well done - Huntress
WeAreTheRisen chapter 4 . 1/15/2015
*pukes* I completely get this... You have been hitting this spot-on!
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