Reviews for The Unforeseen Ally
Guinevere chapter 9 . 10/2/2015
I know this fic ended years ago, but I just wanted to say that a forced sexual act of any kind, whether it's penetration or oral, IS rape. What Orochimaru did to Sasuke WAS rape, not "Just…just really, really horrible sodomy". It was rape.
sazunaki chapter 5 . 9/10/2015
... I dont understand this mashup of a story anymore... but I guess I'll go along with it...
sazunaki chapter 4 . 9/10/2015
I loved everything until this chapter. I feel like the pacing seen in previous chapters completely vanished as you rushed the development of the brothers relationship. It all made sense until now... I feel like Itachi would have had to try harder for Sasuke to be able to feel - to care again. Furthermore, while I support Uchihacest, I feel like it was uncalled for and misplaced in this chapter. If you intended to have it in this story, you should take the time to nurture their relationship so that it would blossom into such a relationship. Adding smut randomly ruins the story you are trying to portray..
Kandalyn Kohl chapter 10 . 6/13/2014
God, I loved this so much...there are no words...
LouiseUchiha chapter 9 . 1/19/2014
So cute! :3 :3
LouiseUchiha chapter 8 . 1/19/2014
Ohhh fuck
LouiseUchiha chapter 7 . 1/19/2014
So sweet! :3
I will ignore theUchihacest parts
LouiseUchiha chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
Poor baby! T-T
LouiseUchiha chapter 5 . 1/19/2014
Oh Fuck!
Deidara you are a bitch!
Poor Sasu-baby T_T
LouiseUchiha chapter 4 . 1/19/2014
No more Uchihascest please!
Everything was awesome until here.
LouiseUchiha chapter 3 . 1/19/2014
So cute his brotherly love!
Dont be Uchihacest please!
LouiseUchiha chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
I think Sasuke is so cute :3
Ph3N10x chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Awesome
Guest chapter 10 . 12/26/2013
I like this story, except the fact that Sasuke was made a man whore... Poor Sasuke. And I know right, Sasuke is so freaking perfect that everyone wants to f*ck him. :) Loved the Uchihacest!
Rosebunse chapter 10 . 10/27/2013
This really cleared stuff up!
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