|Reviews for Of Rose Petals and Chlorine|
| jacksperluvr chapter 1 . 2/13
| wendy1969 chapter 2 . 1/26
Hi, i have read it way before now but am unsire if i reviewed or not.
But although it is a wonderful little one shot, i am curious about one thing.
OK,so maybe it is to things. lol
But the thing is, if anyone knows who may young is from wwe formerly wwf, then you would know why iam concerned that they are not allowed to wear clothing of any sort. A bra is best to be used as well as panties, i mean, wouldn't they believe that they could be beneficial to their body?
I am rather curious and wouldn't being on her hands and knees all the time be bad for her back/spine, and her knees?
| Brickgirl101 chapter 2 . 10/21/2013
I liked this story A LOT! i wish it was more then just a one shot
| RoxieGirl19 chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
I love love love this story! Write more? Please? :D
| Silly.Gemini chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
I really liked your story. It was interesting... It was a first for me to read but since I enjoyed it, I hope you write more
| Anon Kitten chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
as its been said, women dont have a prostate.
Well written story, but would have liked to have seen her as a kitten (ok so maybe im biased... _) would like to see a few more chapters, such as maybe an Alice/Edward one, and maybe a play date where Bella and Edward get to chase each other round a yard etc (my petplay in fairly non sexual)
remember, if you do decide to do petplay in RL, stay safe and have fun :D
| babygirl2928259 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
| kitacullen89 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Hey found this awsome fic on my fanfic app 4 my iphone anywayyyyy will/when are you updating it xx
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
I realize that this story was posted a long time ago and that you probably have no interest in changing any aspects of it, but women do not have prostates. The "G-spot" can be stimulated through the barrier formed by the interior walls of the vagina and anus.
| Hangininthere chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Girls don't have prostates. Just saying. Fun story though.
| ugh chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
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| JackSkellington'sBride chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
Thanks for the read. As for the people who critized you well they aren't very open minded. I loved reading this you have such creativity. Thanks for introducing pet play to me.
| Hey chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Women don't have prostates.
| rosalie2022 chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
i just wanted to let you know that i liked the story just through out the story i couldn't decide weather or not Bella was a human playing a dog or a dog so thanks for that clarification in the second chapter
| TrainOfYouth chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
I liked the story.
I enjoyed the writing as well as where the you took the narrative. It would have been nice to see Bella not in pet play mode, even for just one scene. However, I liked it, I understand the lifestyle as I too partake in some pet play and I felt you portrayed it quite well.
It was a fun lighthearted story.