Reviews for The Lightning Prince
eliteshadow chapter 1 . 3/29
nice chapter please update soon!
Googlemo chapter 1 . 1/17
The story about RETARDEDLY overpowered Naruto. Delete this crap.
Drkm0nkey chapter 8 . 1/16
I've read this story like three times and it's still awesome, the only the problems I have with the story is that the speech Naruto gives it feels unnecessary because he just met Aang and then starts to talk about his beliefs right then and there during the middle of an invasion. I mean Naruto met them and then left in what I thought was like 40mins, who talks about their beliefs and values right when they meet someone for the first time. Then there is the fact that Naruto is so chill about meeting Iroh the man who not only attacked his country for no reason (I think they were neutral at the time) but also captures his Aunt and then says he is honorable. Iroh is one of my favorite characters so it's not like I want to him to be killed but I feel like people forget that he was a General in the Fire Nation and to become such a high rank he must have fought in many battles and sure he could have been honorable during battles in the series, like not killing innocent people and only fighting other soldiers, but in this story he attacked a neutral country and then captured one of their citizens (princess but no one knew then) who wasn't doing anything against the Fire Nation if I remember correctly Iroh doesn't seem so innocent in this story. Every chapter up to this one was great and this one was good too I just felt that somethings in this chapter could have been left out (speech) while some parts deserved more attention (meeting Iroh). Also I thought that Iroh became anti war after his only son died, and then became a good guy but he still fought for the Fire Nation for at least 20 years I think the series might have been to forgiving towards him but that might just be me taking a cartoon war too seriously.
RenTap chapter 8 . 12/30/2013
you know you should update this story more because so far this is the most interesting NarutoXAvatar story I have read so please update the story for your reader to read
ian2671 chapter 9 . 11/16/2013
Nooooooooo. Omg please continue to update the story
PopthePuff chapter 8 . 10/27/2013
I could cry. :: Please update? ._.
lifina chapter 9 . 10/9/2013
it's really cool! please update!
Findarato chapter 9 . 9/29/2013
When are you going to update this story?
darthrevan chapter 9 . 9/20/2013
please update i dying to wait next update i beg you
firehelm chapter 9 . 8/25/2013
this fic was good...why did u stop writing...
WizardShinobi chapter 9 . 8/20/2013
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 9 . 8/2/2013
Will you keep writing this story later? I hope that you do cause I liked it.
cookiedo95 chapter 9 . 7/9/2013
please update soon! it's getting so good :D
Guest chapter 9 . 7/2/2013
are u not updating this story?
Shadowrider246 chapter 9 . 6/29/2013
Please continue the story it's so good
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