Reviews for Must Stop Them
Fairy chapter 5 . 7/26/2015
Ha ha Alice anx Tom married with a child in the arms of Alice it was like juvia x gray
spookslastapprentice chapter 17 . 7/23/2014
Your still writing? THATS AMAZING! Your story's are AWESOME and I am very greatful for how much time you put into these things! GREAT job!
Negativezone chapter 12 . 4/29/2013
Very good has the three of the best attributes of writing action,adventure,and affection.
Guest chapter 17 . 9/18/2012
sucks
Znshsiendmdlxkshebdvdnxhxhshwv chapter 16 . 2/16/2012
another great chapter. you are a truly talented author. i love this story and your other one. keep up the good work!
LuMezenga chapter 15 . 2/12/2012
Lol, you're so funny!

"you're pretty stupid for a demigod." ha!

I have to lunch now so I won't be able to leave reviews on the other chapters, but I'll be back soon :)

Oh, and Alice worrying over Tom is so cute!

Do you think you can make a sequel...?
Znshsiendmdlxkshebdvdnxhxhshwv chapter 13 . 1/22/2012
great story. it is fantastic. please update soon.
Black Opal chapter 11 . 12/31/2011
another great chapter. as always, keep up the good work and update fast.

oh and happy new years!
LuMezenga chapter 8 . 12/31/2011
"I just had an awful dream."

"Did I die again?"

INSENSITIVE much?

And at the same time, hahaha! That's what she gets for telling him everything!

And I'm sorry, but the DEVIL being nice? And helping everyone out? I don't get it. Please Alice Dean, don't fall into his trap.
LuMezenga chapter 7 . 12/31/2011
Hahaha, "pregnancy issues"!

And the best one was, "But I'm a witch." Like, "what are you even doing with me?"

Own, and they love each other! Maybe now they'll stop with the friendship crap.

Am currently dying to read Book 5. American people be damned.

-Lu
LuMezenga chapter 6 . 12/31/2011
OMG BEST LINES EVER:

"I can read your mind not see your family tree."

"So you too huh?"

"I had been alone for twelve years, until I found the reason I'm crying." (owwnn)

"I'm releasing you. It's something big. You can't just… I don't know, cook me some eggs and bacon."

"You have my word." "Hilarious."

Lol so hard! I can't believe it was YOU who actually wrote this...

Well actually I can, if it was me I wouldn't publish until every period and comma was on its place ;)

though- you actually meant "tough". Though is the word you use after Even.

Pretty much all I have to say. Oh, and Alice? Get a life. Don't go around doing pacts with people you barely know. Vai dar merda.

-LuMezenga
LuMezenga chapter 5 . 12/31/2011
Reaction to their talking to Mary: LOL LOL SO HARD!

Reaction to their fight right after: that was not MY idea!

Reaction to Alice walking away: come back! Come back RIGHT NOW, you brat!

Reaction to Stefan showing up: hehehe...
LuMezenga chapter 4 . 12/31/2011
Well well... Apart from missing periods and commas (which irritates me) the story's plot got me hooked... Perhaps because I helped you? Oh, I don't know...

I could totally imagine Tom apologizing and Alice trying not to laugh, I know what it feels like!

The demigod has an interesting name, thanks to Stefanie ;D

And I bet Alice's relationship with this half-brother was totally unknown so far... She'll meet him for the first time in the next few chapters, I believe...

Oh, this is getting better and better... And Mab manipulating Jason? Genius.

-LuMezenga
LuMezenga chapter 3 . 12/30/2011
Ma Correa did crap! I GAVE YOU THE PLOT IDEA! And I alone.

Have to keep reminding you of that, gosh...

"Calm down Alice. They're just morons you have the bad luck to live with."

LOL SO HARD! She's so funny, OMG... Am almost wiping a tear out of my eye here... Ay, ay...

...

And they're finally off on an adventure!
LuMezenga chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
Haha, Alice punched him! Bad-ass girl! Not many would do that with a knife in her throat!

Oh, and her argument with Tom and Jason was so interesting... I wonder what happens next!

And the bogart saved her? Girl, tell you what, this bogart saved EVERYONE'S life throughout the series at least once. He even fought the Devil if I'm not mistaken.

And Jason called Tom a moron? That can't be forgiven!

-LuMezenga
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