Reviews for The Wolf
pfft chapter 1 . 5/15
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in yo
He-Haw chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
well let's see. First of all I don't know what you were thinking about wolves with this but it is just stupidity incarnate. Second of all if you're going to post original works than you should post it on DA instead. Only an idiot puts there original work here.

So yeah, I'm going to report you for this.

Have fun
Reldresal chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Hey faggy. Just checkin up on you. You know you didn't even categorize this as poetry? Not that I blame you, it's complete shit anyways.

You know, I'm starting to think you don't know how this site works at all.
Reldresal chapter 1 . 8/22/2014
Hi. I'm the guy who keeps leaving you those . reviews. I did this to catch your attention. Why don't you move this thing to fictionpress where it belongs?

Also, I want to point out a mistake in The keeper of Krypton-Gallifrey is actually in our galaxy.

Until you update again and fix this problem I will be leaving you this message everyday. Okay?

oh and btw before you forget, you can always just pm to talk back
Reldresal chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Hi. I'm the guy who keeps leaving you those . reviews. I did this to catch your attention. Why don't you move this thing to fictionpress where it belongs?

Also, I want to point out a mistake in The keeper of Krypton-Gallifrey is actually in our galaxy.

Until you update again and fix this problem I will be leaving you this message everyday. Okay?
Reldresal chapter 1 . 8/15/2014
Hi. I'm the guy who keeps leaving you those . reviews. I did this to catch your attention. Why don't you move this thing to fictionpress where it belongs?

Also, I want to point out a mistake in The keeper of Krypton-Gallifrey is actually in our galaxy.

Until you update again and fix this problem I will be leaving you this message everyday. Okay?
Reldresal chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Hi. I'm the guy who keeps leaving you those . reviews. I did this to catch your attention. Why don't you move this thing to fictionpress where it belongs?

Also, I want to point out a mistake in The keeper of Krypton-Gallifrey is actually in our galaxy.

Until you update again and fix this problem I will be leaving you this message everyday. Okay?
Trubie74 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Wow that was really good, very well written. My favorite part was the ending about Mason. Just a thought, but you may want to move this to the Misc. section. Also, I read the other reviews for this and I don't know what their problem was, this is an awesome poem. Nicely done!
read ur profile chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
I feel so sorry for you. I must be a hard life when you are an EMO
read ur profile chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
in my day we had a word for people like you. Poser
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