Reviews for Must Not Fail
HoothootOwls chapter 2 . 2/25/2014
I loved it a lot.
Anonymous chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
Please please update this. Maybe like a chapter where the brothers think back to the times when they were all happy and maybe Francis remembering malcolm as a little baby or child or something. Just please please add another chapter!
Jack chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Well a third chapter afterwards would be nice. I really enjoyed it, but there were too far chapters for me.
Mai Ascot chapter 2 . 6/1/2012
Yay! Another chapter! Thanks so much for making this story seem finished, I really enjoyed it! (WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME?)
Mai Ascot chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
Wow... that's very deep. He just wanted to see Francis...

Could this be a two-shot, maybe with Francis' PoV following? Just asking. I can't help but get the feeling that the story's not over...
KHwhitelion chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
...too lazy to log in...

Awww come onnnnn give us another chapter! I needs more Francis in my life XD

This was dark and yet...different. I like that Malcolm decided he didn't want to die, and ended up scared of what he was doing.
Absalom2692 chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Woah. Intense.

Intense, but good.
lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Please continue
Some person you don't know chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
Come on! You have to continue this!