|Reviews for Fair Play|
| anon chapter 1 . 8/20
JUST READ THE LATEST MORE THAN HUMAN CHAPTER. I CAME HERE FOR THE FEELS. I LOVE THE GREENS!
| Bitter Cat Lady chapter 1 . 6/19
I can't help but feel that Losers go to Cabo and this fic ate set in the MtH/TEF universe, since Buttercup obviously has an issue being left out there, and there's thid comment from Butch about seeing Buttercup popping out a lot of kids. Anyway, great writing as always! I couldn't expect more from you.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
AAAWWWWW GREENS WHY THEY'RE SO SWEET AAAAAAHHH MY HEART MELT
| sonder this chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
This has to be my favorite story from you about the Greens, with the exception of MtH (BUT WE WON'T GO THERE GIRL, oh no we won't.) Your decision to have them (or at least Buttercup) name all their kids the same name was brilliant. I laughed the first time I saw it in one of your other one-shots about the Reds and at the time I had thought it was because the Green couple was just too lazy to come up with more than one name. But lo n' behold, there was a story behind it and not surprisingly, I love it. The reason is very believable in terms of Buttercup's character. What I had truly enjoyed though was her conversation with Butch about her nightmare; now that - that dialogue was something I could imagine them having (you even managed to inject some Butch-humor during such a serious topic). The whole duration, you managed to make my feelings oscillate between melancholy and somberness. And what a great feeling it was C:
| MewMewKitty78 chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
This was great. I loved the relationship between Buttercup and Butch and how you can just feel the comfort and familarity between them. I would love to see a fic about their thoughts on being parents and how they handle their adult relationship together.
| AnimeChic Kaoru chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
| jtdarkman chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Well thats was sweet and very fucking touching lol
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
You've made buttercup my absolute favorite character.
| Kimarys Adriana chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
| gibeibge chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
I'm dead you have killed me
| n2a0d0i0a chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
This was a very unique take on things here.
First off, I love how you portrayed the whole Butch and Buttercup in later life. Their relationship dynamic is still very believable, and immediately had me hooked. The dialogue really contributed to this.
Secondly, I really like how you were able to tie in Buttercup's childhood insecurities into how she raises her kids. I think this part is very realistic, and emotional.
Thirdly, I like how you didn't use a traditional dialogue format. How you portrayed the conversation really contributed to the mood of the story. And, it wasn't confusing, which often happens when people don't uses quotations.
Nice job on this one, as always!
| nanirain chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
This was great, parent Greens are sort of scary in how I can actually really imagine them... being parents. But I'm not sure it says anything about Buttercup except that she wants some sort of thing to feel guilty about and Butch just keeps things simple as fuck and punch through it if it says otherwise. Great shot though. Wants mores.
| Sisypheria chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
I like how you've given us a glimpse of how both Buttercup and Butch think. How she resents any favoritism and strives to be as fair as possible to her kids because of how she felt in childhood while Butch is concerned with keeping the one thing he never had growing up-love, familial and romantic..all of it. His dialogue with her is perfect: "You're a good guy. I'm a bad guy. You'll be fair and make the tough choices. And me, I'll just be selfish."
Naming all the kids Bruce is freaking hilarious yet very fitting. It makes the reader pause and think, really? But holy crap. It's something they'd do as parents, especially Buttercup. Delving into these characters' minds like this is refreshing (yet on another level almost uncomfortable when you see how tragic some of the side effects of their childhoods are).
Thanks for this short story... It's rare to find something like this, especially in fanfiction. I hesitate at what I want to call it. Realistic? Psycho-analytical? A lot of fanfiction authors go for what they and (much more commonly) their readers want. The idealistic stuff. Fluff. Puppy-love romance. Unfortunately that kind of thing cheapens the values of characters as individuals... You, however, have written an accurate portrayal of how the characters think. I'm rambling now, but damn. Thank you, sbj! Never stop being the writer you are.
| Iceagesurvivor123 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
Buttercup baby cmere let me cuddle you
| Queen of Spiritual chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Another good fic. I never knew Buttercup and Butch liked the name Bruce that much. I thought it would confusing to name all the kids that. How would they all respond to the name?