|Reviews for The Story of Us|
| Hottstuff JK chapter 2 . 9/12/2014
Really crapy grammar.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
you guys and yoa lover re sick twisted p.s i hate hate gay pairings their disgusting
| gratsulover117 chapter 7 . 12/18/2013
U should make a sequeal with natsu and his son :)
| lemonyen chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
You just ruined my image of Natsu.
| littlelionalicious chapter 6 . 6/4/2013
You really should make a sequel!
| writtingsabitch chapter 2 . 9/23/2012
Its a really good story, and I really enjoy it but it seriously has grammar problems, more specifically your word conversions, and the misuse of plural words.
| Kuroi Mercenary chapter 7 . 8/13/2012
Hm...It was interesting, what could really work is the grammar and correcting some spelling mistakes.
| a dude chapter 7 . 8/7/2012
o,o omfg i want more Zatsu fanfictions, but the grammer in this one... can u please work on that?
| Snow Siren chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
You should list this story in the summary as containing mpreg.
| Fairy Tail Epicness chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Awww poor Natsu!
| Zereflover chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
OMFG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE EDITED AND SEQUEL!
| iHeartZatsu chapter 6 . 3/24/2012
dear my fellows reviwers, readers, nn subsribers i will edit this story, write a sequel, and write more stories :D after April 1st [my bday]
| Yuki-n-Shuichi4evrfan33 chapter 7 . 3/14/2012
This was a really good story once again I'm sorry that I took so long to read this and review, but I was kinda busy. But the naext you do a story please make Natsu the one who pregnent. LOVE THE STORY!
| darkhuntressxir chapter 6 . 3/6/2012
please make the sequel! pretty please...
| Summer 3 chapter 5 . 12/12/2011
Nice story! i really like it! Please update soon!
The only problem is your english.. but it doesn't matter to me. :D As long as it's a good story! GOOD JOB!