|Reviews for Vice City Tales: Paradise Threatened|
| SlayerDarth chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
This was a good first chapter. Tommy seems to be more level-headed in this story than he ever was in the game. I like it that Rosenberg has a much more productive role than in the game as well. It's a shame that the bikers stole half of the shipment, and I hope they get it back, because a conflict with a group of angry Mexicans is never a good thing.
Tommy also seems to be more old-school and traditional in this story than in the game, which I like, because Tommy was a bit too greedy at times in the video game.
Also, I thought that the Cubans weren't their enemies? After all, Tommy was friends with Umberto Robina.
It was also good that you provided us with a backstory for the Flame Retchers. Good job.
Also, do you mind checking out my GTA fanfic? I'm in need of reviews and it would be nice to have an experienced writer as yourself checking it out. That is, if you have the time.
Onto the next update...