|Reviews for He Doesn't See Me|
| cooltreeko chapter 17 . 2/2
oh my gosh.. this story was so awesome, and I loved how you were busting with creative words, yet not 'over' doing it. Now I'm gonna go to read the sequel! :D
| tylovestree chapter 11 . 11/21/2013
I love love love this story!
| ROOCIS chapter 17 . 2/24/2012
This story rocked! In some of the chapters I actually cried while reading this. So I plan on reading the sequal.
| bleach102 chapter 17 . 12/6/2011
i loved it to pieces
| Mariel1 chapter 17 . 11/12/2011
I really love the way this turned out. Rosabelle is a refreshing change over the usual picture of a delicate princess, and I rather liked the way you portrayed her growing relationship with Bowser. It didn't make sense for him to immediately fall for her, because he was so focused on another target with that one-track mind of his that it never even occurred to him to consider her.
Bowser's ex-wife seemed pretty heartless! And her characterization is actually a bit similar to the one I had in mind, but you got yours down first and it's still not a mirror image. So, I just want to avoid any misunderstandings in the future, if you happen upon any of my own stuff. I'm not copying you, I promise; I've had Clawdia Von Dreher's character in mind for the past three years, I just can't prove it. XD
I really admire your writing. Keep up the good work!
| Elemental Queen chapter 17 . 10/23/2011
A sequel? Heck yeah sounds fun
| wilfrefangirl1000 chapter 17 . 10/22/2011
awwww... i love this story pleeze update again ASAP (as soon as possible)
| Jenova chapter 17 . 10/22/2011
This story was very sweet and your OC was great. Wonder what the Mario Bros. and Peach are going to do with themselves now that Bowser won't be kidnapping her anymore?
| Verran chapter 17 . 10/22/2011
Somehow I was reminded of Beauty and the Beast at varying points throughout this story, as both characters learned to see beyond their first impressions of each other and allow love to blossom.
I don't normally go for stories of this genre, but this one was so well constructed and well written that it had me hooked all the way through.
This has a satisfying ending, as well as leaving the door ajar for thought. The union between Rosabelle and Bowser will greatly affect relations between her home kingdom and Dark Land. I also wonder what effect it will have on the Mushroom Kingdom.
Thanks for a great read, and good luck with writing the sequel.
| Kittenstuffandthings chapter 17 . 10/22/2011
I've been secretly following this since chapter 1 came out... and I loved it! I think Bowser's been bumped up the list of my favourite characters _
| SamsunG chapter 16 . 10/21/2011
i have to say this story is relly good. i read the whole thing and could not put it down for long. enjoyed it very much.
| Elemental QueenTooLazyToLogIn chapter 16 . 10/21/2011
I'm happy theyre finally married :3 Yay
| TooLazyToLogIn chapter 15 . 10/21/2011
:D I loved it. Not much more to say about that. Everytime I see the updates I get happy even if i know they will come everyday anyways, i look forward to them.
| Verran chapter 15 . 10/21/2011
What a great love story! And an interesting perspective of the Mushroom Kingdom from the Darkland point of view.
A true fairytale story with a happy ending (unless there's another twist on its way?)
| Elemental Queen chapter 13 . 10/19/2011
The roses part was my fave of this chapter :3
The end had a tragic feel :( I could feel it, good writers have a way of making their audience feel emotions :D awesome!