Reviews for Pawn Becomes King
DragonsDeadAndDancing chapter 1 . 12/3/2015
I love this. Too many people paint Merrill as the distracted, innocent kid she is on the surface and neglect her dark, bitter, broken core. Also, demons.
Thank you for writing this.
A Markov chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Very well done. concept, execution, pacing, all spot on. Pulled me right through to the end and gave me chills.

-Alex
phoenixblade7 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
nice, I hope it's continued
Madam Grey chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Wow, you wrote a very compelling story here. Merrill's insecurities and the trials she goes through facing the different demons is believable and intriguing. The ending was great - it felt complete, yet left me wondering.

Thanks for writing this!
snippetcentric chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Whoa. The ending blew me away.
Talitha2 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
Thats just... I mean ... Wow ... I am speechless. Hope you will write more. Greetings from Germany!
karebear chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Holy crap, that was amazing!