|Reviews for Broken Faith|
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/16
| BringerOfStorms chapter 13 . 7/7
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| Guest chapter 28 . 4/18
Dude, your story is good, but your Latin is bad. Nihil et regnum does not mean empty throne. It literally translates as "nothing and throne".
| Me llamo Fher chapter 1 . 4/12
continua por fa
| AthenaSmile chapter 31 . 3/21
to sum up all my emotions atm...
'if i find your profile with a sequel not updated in years...im gonna rage.'
(i kinda have a soft spot for eva so i had hoped naruto took her as his wife as well..idk. shipping tendency)
i like how you insult this other fic tho with your AN's haha
want more. you deserve the top spot for this x-over with filter: romance, sorted:faves. i hope you understood what that meant..haha
| AthenaSmile chapter 25 . 3/21
i keep on saying this, 'this guys has a very good set of songs in his playlist'
and gosh darn it, i love how you just...touched my heartstrings just by inserting the song title...like, 'oh, this song. ok, im gonna be tearing up in this chapter'
3 nonetheless :)
| AthenaSmile chapter 12 . 3/20
i hate you.
"Trust You" is a very sore song title for me, and you just had to include another reason why...
| himalay1729 chapter 31 . 1/20
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 12/26/2015
great yet another story where he just blabs his history to complete strangers... also, the Totsuka sword doesn't even work that way...
| JadeKaiser chapter 31 . 11/24/2015
Well, This story has had its ups and downs. You started off by using some really bad fanon cliches and such, but you improved a lot by the end. I was annoyed by the fact that you felt that just because Negima was a harem story originally you needed to give your crossed over main character a harem as well, but it wasn't as bad as most harem fics I have read. Since I came here from some of your newer stories I was willing to give you a little slack: I knew that your writing eventually improved with time.
On another note, You seem to get a lot of rather idiotic flames for this story. Tough break on that mate, don't let them get to you.
| winddemon199 chapter 13 . 11/9/2015
What the hell is this Moral bullshit it's a naive view of the world with this doing what's right bull crap and showing that people who do what they want are bad and it's wrong by the way there is no forth category.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/9/2015
Yeah that was total bullshit
| StoneTheLoner chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
I find this "Can he rebuild his faith in humanity" crap to be boring. Why does it even matter? it's not like he actually needs to reconnect with humanity. So what if during the story he doesn't get along with them? Move on with something more interesting.
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/11/2015
You sick brilliant bastard. Yes it's a compliment.
| ShadowImageComics chapter 31 . 7/20/2015
Nice, I can not wait to read it for this story was dong so well. I liked the way you worked in the actual events while Keep Naruto in tune as well. I thought at first you were going to make him OP, but you managed to find a balance and placed good limits while giving him room to glow. This was a good read.