|Reviews for Immortal|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
I hope this is updated soon as it is very good
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Good story, hope you update soon
| moosejuice5 chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
an interesting start
| MeinNameIstHase chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Good prologue. It's also a good oneshot, but I'm hopeful.
| CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 9/5/2013
| ravermike chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
please tell you can continue this
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
What a wonderful start. Now if only you would update...
| Ratus chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
OK, Mean person :) toss out a good start like this and then just leave us hanging out in the verse with no followup?!
| The Defenestrated Typewriter chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
possibilities for a good story here, it would have been nice to see where you would take it
| Bone Idle chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
you know what rather than just following one or two of your stories i'm just gunna click follow author cause i enjoy your writing style.
| killroy225 chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
two immortals battling, that WOULD be interesting. continue this!
| Ethorin chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
it really would be...
fights between Immortal(ish) beings are always fun since they rarely actually fight directly...
so amusing(and sometimes frustrating) to try to find the subtle clues of their conflict...
| negligibleSanity chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This is an excellent concept. I hope you decide to expand on it in future.
| Nanchih chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
ennui setting in
| Gseven chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Interesting start. A bit fast on the story, but engaging. Will it be continued?