|Reviews for Playing with Fire|
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/10/2013
As much as i love XT-421 i could barely read any of this...Also that XxXxXxX thing is sooo annoying. sounds too nerdy too. rate: 1/5
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Intro was boring...That Class/race/alignment thingy makes no sense at all
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/3/2012
I asume that the XT fired a dragon arrow.
| a fan L chapter 9 . 4/18/2012
I see what you did there, with the clichè-ness of the kiss. Also woo for me for being one of your few “commenters” :D
| XT-421 chapter 2 . 10/8/2011
Ok, so. I read the "Read Me!" Chapter, and initially wanted to slap you in the face. I HATE intros like that, I feel that an introductary chapter that explains people is much nicer, even if it is a continuation of the same story. (DON'T YOU CHANGE IT. Keep it so you remember.)
But... damn... Maybe it is because I used to play Runescape awhile back, or because no one has ever really done an XT/Runescape fanfiction... GAH! I can't shower you with praise, because I forbid myself due to how fans tend to react to it.
Regardless, I read to the end leaning a bit forward, squealing a tad with glee when you introduced my favorite motif: Wishing on a star, and doubly so when you ADDRESSED THE LANGUAGE BARRIER (It needs work, it would've been much more interesting if he couldn't initially speak, but, I have yet to see where you go with this,) and... well... I said "Damn it's over?" when I saw the review button.
So, damnit. You did well. I normally don't wish this upon fans, because then I fan over my fans, and we create some spacetime continuity error which ends up making my life miserable to a degree.
But, if you write more, I will read.
You did have a number of small spelling and grammar errors. Try to fix them and check your work three times over each upload. I always do.