Reviews for The Unexpected
mangolasi chapter 32 . 11/8/2023
DUDE! I spent like three hours in a row reading this. THIS IS SO FREAKING GOOD! I literally thought I was reading a sequel to Percabeth's life. I love this story, defo fav.
Guest chapter 29 . 5/2/2023
My name is Olivia so i was like OLIVIA JACKSON?! Great fanfic and name
madisonrose2022 chapter 32 . 3/2/2023
Ending was so good it made me cry! Loved the twist that it had.
SeaweedGirl19 chapter 23 . 6/24/2021
Artemis hunger hahaha
Anyone else catch that?
PercyShips3 chapter 1 . 6/11/2021
I hate Annabeth here the way she completely ignored Percy's opinion on their baby, and gave her up anyway knowing he wanted to keep her was a SHIT MOVE.

Also Percy has right as the childs father, shouldn't she need his signature to as well to adopt the baby
kenyatta.harmon0516 chapter 1 . 12/17/2020
I don't really like Annabeth in this story the fact is Percy is the child's father and deserves a say too. She gave up their child knowing he wanted the baby.

Doesn't he have parental rights too. He should've been able to argue against the adoption.
Guest chapter 32 . 11/16/2020
P-L-O-T T-W-I-S-T!
Man, this story is epic!
Percabethforever chapter 32 . 9/8/2020
This fanfic was beautiful... You have done an amazing job.. keep it up :)
NikDem chapter 32 . 8/20/2020
Ok, oh the times the entire story was in someone’s head, this story was by far the best version in my opinion. It has the rom com warm fuzzy feelings and some real world pain sprinkled in to keep you grounded.
Great doc glad I read.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/19/2020
U said that her bday was on june 4th in the last chapter...and in this one u have said it is on May?
I know that I'm too late to post it bruh...
Guest chapter 32 . 6/24/2020
Wow. What a great ending to this story.
AlEmily360 chapter 6 . 6/22/2020
When could we read Percy's side of the story?
KB chapter 30 . 5/2/2020
OH MY GODS, i feakin' love her name and her room it's just do pretty. Nice job!
JasperLoveMe chapter 11 . 12/14/2018
What...
ANONYMOUS chapter 12 . 12/30/2017
That was a good chapter.
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