Reviews for Father's Guilt
kasumi misuto chapter 60 . 4/17
I'm starting to read this fanfiction from 2 days ago and its amazing...thank you for writing..
CaitiAthena chapter 7 . 9/20/2016
well then...
CaitiAthena chapter 6 . 9/20/2016
Uther, your a utter dumbass, I hope that you know that.
CaitiAthena chapter 5 . 9/20/2016
oh crap...
CaitiAthena chapter 4 . 9/20/2016
stupid Dragon, don't go telling of Merlin's place * laughs*
CaitiAthena chapter 1 . 9/20/2016
oh my poor boy Merlin...
Charlie-is-bae chapter 61 . 8/22/2016
I usually can't read stories this long, but yours is intriguing. I was very good! :)
HgSpartan chapter 61 . 8/17/2016
Good stuff. Some of the episodes followed the canon too closely for my taste, but there is no accounting for taste.
HgSpartan chapter 35 . 8/17/2016
This is better than most that I've read. And the plot is engaging and fresh. I, for one, am glad you finished out.
akuryoyakuza chapter 54 . 5/19/2016
Actually... um it's Idirsholas. I looked it up. (JTC you spelled it Idrisholas.)
akuryoyakuza chapter 29 . 5/16/2016
Just so you know, the reason Merlins mother didn't need the water brought to her is because nimueh died even though she was not supposed to. This balanced out the life exchange before Huniths death could, so hunith no longer needed to die. That's why she got better. You didn't actually need to give nimueh any water. Of course, I think that in the show, the reason Gaius says Merlin has conquered life and death is because he has become equivalent to the cup of life and the cockatrice. Pretty much, he didnt need the cup of life to trade nimueh for his mother. This obviously had nothing to do with your story though since Arthur kills Nimueh instead, but I figured I'd include my thoughts while I was at it. ;)
IAlwaysKeepShipping chapter 61 . 11/10/2015
soooo gooood
whattheDalek chapter 35 . 9/21/2015
Don't let one reviewer dampen your spirit for writing. This site is not only for the professionals, and there is no way for others to improve without practice and friendly criticism. Your plot line is engaging enough to keep a reader wanting more, and although it could have more description and there are a few grammar mistakes, the characterization is well done and I love the twists you put on the Merlin world. Please don't be discouraged, and keep writing!
whattheDalek chapter 16 . 9/21/2015
Ahahaha gotta love oblivious Uther. Wow the Gaius comes up with that Uther believes without question ahahaha this is great. Of course, I could do the character analysis thing where Uther is willing to take any explanation, no matter how ridiculous, to avoid the truth :) But I'll just sit here and enjoy some Prince Merlin goodness :)
Jojo012245 chapter 1 . 8/31/2015
Hi just reading the first chapter- it's great love the story- but in the uk colour is spelt like that, it's only in U.S. that it's color
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