Reviews for in the snow
Tbird2290 chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
No, you got foalan from da book Wolves of the beyond by Cathren Lasky. Dare da best books eva! Foa means wolf and river. lan means gift. He was Thunderhearts gift from da river after her cub died.
HeroesOfAllSorts chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Hey,

The story moves a little too fast, and you could be a bit more descriptive. Otherwise, the plot seems original. I'm going to warn you that you might get accused of copying a bit, although I don't think you did. Faolan is also the name of the main wolf character in a popular book series. Anyway, keep writing!

-Runufooie