|Reviews for Mr Gold Goes to Washington|
| KellyD chapter 17 . 1/24
tbc are cruel cruel letters.
| aprilf00l chapter 17 . 1/23
Great update! Loved especially his thoughts when sees the cut on her forehead, about "the world breaking people like her faster and people like him assisting" - that segment was really deep!
| Nkhen chapter 17 . 1/23
Enter...KALINDA! A serious ass-whoppin' is sure to follow. Wonderful :-)
And I'm conflicted for Eli - clearly he wants to be with her during the Line-up but real life unfortunately gets in the way. They do have the promise of lunch though...that'll be a refuge in the midst of all the general craziness.
And I think the blue sedan isn't a violence threat, I think it's someone from the party looking to keep tabs on him. A happy Eli must be an anamoly...damn people and their happiness-crushing ways :'(
Everything's heating up...can't wait for more :-D
| Libbi Derington chapter 17 . 1/22
That was so adrenaline pumping, haven't read anything so good in a long time. Absolutely loving it. Thanks :D!
| Libbi Derington chapter 16 . 1/10
Absolutely love this story and cannot wait for more :D!
| stitchangel88 chapter 16 . 12/11/2013
I have recently come across this story simply because I couldn't find a lot of stories about these two. However, I was very excited to find your story and I have to say that I love it. I hope that you continue this story very soon because I can't wait to see what happens next.
| KellyD chapter 16 . 12/8/2013
This is EXACTLY what I wanted for Christmas, how did you know? Well okay, actually I want them to do something like this on the show, but fanfic'll do until then.
| Nkhen chapter 16 . 12/4/2013
(Open-mouthed sensual stunned silence...)
Damn. Hot tingly damn...
Yummi. Yes indeed. Now write more!
| Nkhen chapter 15 . 12/4/2013
You are a tease...
| Nkhen chapter 14 . 12/4/2013
Soz to hear about your hard-drive. I'd be in pieces if i lost mine.
But thanks for climbing back on the horse and re-writing this chapter for us.
Usually I'm a fan of smut and raunchy sex scenes - especially for characters who are jst begging to be allowed to be naughty. But this...this slow measured build up for these two - i like this even more!
| Nkhen chapter 13 . 12/4/2013
Ooohhh...so close to sexy-time. It's all so graceful and delicate. I like it.
Nora paradigm of administrative discretion!
| Nkhen chapter 10 . 12/4/2013
Seriously? Dick couldn't just find someone else?!he attacked her...seriously o_O what a bastard.
I know I'm not even there yrt but Eli should call Kalinda and tell her to bring HER bat. Ah what a douche...
(Deep breaths as i start chapter11)
| Nkhen chapter 9 . 12/4/2013
Mrs Green is a fairy Godmother.
I don't care what else you write about her, but that's what she is. Magical, omniscient, cheeky and fun. I like her. Don't kill her off. She's lovely
| Nkhen chapter 8 . 12/4/2013
Ok, so I'm obviously tearing through this because now I'm invested in seeing how these two turn out.
I gush with happiness and eager anticipation with every chapter...that's not really a review i can write because that would jst get noring for you to read. But yey yey yey.
I love their slightly static dance around each other in the morning but the gentle courage they're moving forward in is lovely. And those kisses...romantic. not like bodice-ripping hot but i think ENa would be more calm, graceful and dignified about getting their swerve on. And i love it. Yey some more
| Nkhen chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
He made dinner for her...that really is sweet, thoughtful and very Eli.
I'm happily bowled over by this fic. You've taken 2 characters i love and given them life beyond the snippets they're afforded on the show. Yey for you :-)