Reviews for Hypnosis
thunderbird5 chapter 16 . 4/8/2013
Nice but can they please leave the language.
Mistoffles chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
What I don't understand is why are they all acting like children? They certainly aren't acting like grown men who have a dngerous and responsible job. And what's with the irrationally short tempers?

Sorry, got this far and cannot go any further. Too over the top and out of character for me.
JoTracy123 chapter 16 . 4/6/2013
hey this is getting really good. Scott and Virgil having a go at each other. I feel so sorry for Gordon now as he has will be in the middle of it. Great work by the way and I am now looking forward to the next chapter now. bring it on lol
thunderbird5 chapter 15 . 3/25/2013
Why's everyone so snappish?
JoTracy123 chapter 15 . 3/24/2013
Ok this is getting really good and I mean good so update really soon x
thunderbird5 chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
Shame, poor Scotty. Grumpy eh?
GinnyStar chapter 14 . 3/11/2013
Short but to the point, and what action
JoTracy123 chapter 14 . 3/10/2013
Great chapter and so glad that Scott is alright but I got this feeling that Scott will be sitting out a bit on this one. Leaving Gordon and Virgil to work on their own. Anyway update soon. Loving this story lol
thunderbird5 chapter 13 . 3/4/2013
Shame, poor Scotty.
mhebert chapter 13 . 3/3/2013
Love it! Can't wait foe more!
JoTracy123 chapter 13 . 3/3/2013
oh no you don't get right back here and update. I hate cliff hangers. Ok calming down now. great chapter by the way and update this really really soon.
thunderbird5 chapter 12 . 2/24/2013
Someone's ticked. :-)
JoTracy123 chapter 12 . 2/24/2013
Gordon is in some mood. Can't wait till jeff hears about the joke thing. This I'd getting really good update soon xxxx
thunderbird5 chapter 11 . 2/18/2013
Shame. Poor Gordon. His going to be really ticked when he finds out that Scott had played a nasty joke on him. Shame on you Scotty. And John. Oi!
JoTracy123 chapter 11 . 2/17/2013
Can I say that was a really good joke. I loved it not offen Gordon gets a joke pulled on him. Anyway this chapter made me laugh so update soon lol
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