Reviews for Kindergarten Flirting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I read all of your completed story and I have to say it, it surely the best. There are no plotholes and most of the things make sense, the reader can see that you're improved (so I'm curiose about the most recent ones but I don't to start one if I don't know you're coming back to them). Anyway, as I was saying, I found your old ones a little bit incoherent in some point or I didn't appreciate the way you developed the plot, but this one made me laugh and was really refreshing, hence I thought I could leave you a review even if time has passed since you completed it. I still find Kagome annoying at some point (how she kept refusing Inuyasha even when he confessed his love with no little difficulty and she practically knew she felt the same) but everything worked it out fine at the end. Also kudos for the originality: you made a whole story based on a common saying, that's hilarious and brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg where do you find men like this… |
![]() ![]() aww this is soooooo good..you really are a amazing writer :) :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This the second story I have read by you and I must say I am highly impressed. Now I am by no means a writer but I do love to read. (My husband gets annoyed with the amount of time I spend reading) You captivated me from the very first chapter and held that attention clear through. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice start... love it |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story as always! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, I can’t find the lemon. Where’s the lemon?! Or rather, “where’s the beef?”. Super old American cultural joke but I really feel like it fits here. I need that lemon, I’ve been waiting for it! Please tell me it still exists! You should just post it here on ff. I have some pretty detailed lemons in my stuff and I’ve read some really raunchy stuff on others. I think as long as you warn people there’s a lemon then they don’t get mad. (Shrugs) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just got done reading Kindergarten Flirting on Mediaminer so I could read all of the lemons too. Lol. I just wanted to let you know it was amazing! I love modern InuKag fics. I was worried because on mediaminer it is still listed as a work in progress and I was so nervous it was going to be at a high point and then left high and dry, seeing as it was posted in 2012 and last updated in 2012. I was so excited to see it was finished. It was absolutely hilarious. I laughed the entire time. I'm having the same reaction in Elementary Love. I absolutely cant wait to read more on that one when you choose to post. :) You have a gift for mixing the humor with the serious. I applaud you. Thanks for finishing this so perfect for me. I love reading that there were Inu babies. Lol! Best wishes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Found it on mediaminer! So hawt! Lol! That's one way to make a guy forget what's on his mind. Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I caught myself giggling so much! Like a darn teenager. I love the Mrs Takahashi. Swooned. Lol |
![]() ![]() Loved indulging in this fic over the past two days! Thanks for creating such a lovely masterpiece :) |
![]() ![]() I can’t read the lemon part please help me :-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t find the lemon part please help me. The link won’t work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an awesome storyline! I loved it! The characters, the pranks, the good and the bad! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! i loved it! thank you for writing such awesomeness! |