|Reviews for Remembrance|
| Dark Lord Link chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
It's good, no doubt. I admire the idea, but it definitely needs more attention to detail. I suggest you elaborate the environment with simple yet clear descriptions, where they are, what time of day, what season, etc.
I can see promise in you, even if you're not writing Link-based fictions, haha, I read too much about him but even I branch out every now and then to try something not him.
With a bit more polishing, you'll shine as bright as the Master Sword.