|Reviews for Cope to Make a Change|
| P chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I like urs best BTW. ;)
| RositaLG chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
You had me at "It's new." I was crazy grinning like a fool. You write so smoothly it baffles my mind that you can think otherwise. Every word is strung together like a melody of a song. It just flows in this beautiful way that would make me secretly hate you if I didn't love you so much.
There were several levels to this. The surface, "Holy shit, can she ever write!" level where I gush about your talent and the second "I know this girl and all the references in this story" level. Since we all know you're a genius, let's start with the first level:
This paragraph blew my mind: "It's exciting. But it's scary as well for these two people who have been living apart for so long. So they're a little afraid of allowing the other to leave their sight, and neither of them really sleeps, and they try to stay vigilant. They try to see all the signals. They try to keep from repeating mistakes and instead they manage to make new ones, but they try. And because he's a gambler and she's a scientist, they know all about increased odds. As long as they keep trying, they're bound to get somewhere. Eventually. They've already made a baby, and while that had arguably been the easy part, they both feel (kind of) confident that they'll (maybe) make it."
"Because I didn't make the decision!" she shouts. "It's my life, Booth. My work. And the decision wasn't mine!"" - I love that you chose to make Brennan the person who wanted to keep it a secret. It's a 180 from my take and I loved the way you explored it.
"and then she's a whole new kind of pissed off because she certainly had more common sense than to go around striking things that don't feel pain before Booth. Booth, with his idiotic penchant for slamming doors and punching walls and yelling at other drivers that can't even hear him. It may have gotten her arrested a time or two but at least assaulting people produced far more satisfying results. - Such great characterization. Also, is something that has actually happened in my brain so I like it even more.
The Booth side of this same coin with him in the gym/shooting range? Just circle the whole damn scene in bright blue ink and write FAVORITE next to it. Genius.
Now the deeper level:
"Brennan breaks eye contact suddenly, and coincidentally she's now very, very concentrated on the clothes spread out on the bed in front of her." AND this: "Booth's eyes flit helplessly above her head, as if he expects to find the right answer somewhere in the air around them". These are Ren faces. lol. And the fact that they are in this story made me so incredibly happy.
Would you, could you, "In a hammock?" or "against a tree?" We really have to stop mixing Dr. Seuss and fic. It's getting strange. lol.
Cupcakes? Come on, you know I gotta support that. ;)
Ten Jenny points and my undying devotion, my dear. You knocked it out of the park again.
| JMHaughey chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
I love the convos. For some reason, I can see some of these in my future with Hypothetical H.