|Reviews for I am Black Light|
| mason chapter 5 . 6/9/2013
I would love to see this story continued
| TimberlineWolf chapter 5 . 6/5/2013
DAMN dude! this is awsome!
you gonna finish it?
| LeviathanTamer chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
heh heh very nice introduction you made there Black
CONSIDER THIS STORY FOLLOWED.
| Styx chapter 2 . 6/14/2012
Viking not vicking
OK nice info dump to establish Blacks character. Also the test shows the Dominions attitude to its citizens/recruits. I like it.
Btw look up Unfamiliar on TvTropes if you don't already know it :)
| Styx chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
It's The Zerg (plural) although Blacklight can be forgiven for being a unreliable narrator, also people not peoples.
Otherwise nice premise, good work on the descriptions. Short and matching the frantic pace of the action.
| starspawn07 chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
Your style looks spontaneous and down-to-earth.
The tension is also just right, for now.
Take your time, but keep the good stuff comin :)
| starspawn07 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
hmm, looks promising :)
I'll give a more relevant review when I've read the latest chapter.
| Trunnwildcat chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
So far so good, keep up the good work. *U*d
| He Who See's chapter 5 . 10/13/2011
"Hey, I'm Black."
-I didn't know Blacklight was...black!
| He Who See's chapter 4 . 10/10/2011
Interesting as always (though I could have done without him acquiring some of the traits of the first person he consumed, I suppose he'll have trouble sorting through the memmories and emotions at first). Though I have to ask...is Black Light a zerg, part of the black-light virus, or some horrible...horrible...horrible...combination of the two?
Also, not to sound desperate (which I'm totally not *Wink Wink Nudge Nudge*), but is it at anyways possible for...you to review any of my stuff? I'm serious. I've been here for months and I've only ever gotten two reviews. I can't stick with a story for very long without other people support (or lack thereof paradoxially)!
| He Who See's chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
"He who See's: well, Hob never meant his story to be the best and neither do I, we're both just telling a story :)"
That doesn't mean you have to tell it poorly. Just look at my tales!
*Looks at Al-Dur's Saga which had been put on hiatus*.
Uhhh...look at this tale!
*Looks at Mass Effect: The Last Son of Krypton which has been put on hiatus*
Uhhh...look at this tale!
*Looks at The Avatars: The Tenth Tournament which in all likely-hood be discontinued due to lack of interest and the over-abundance of seriousness and terrible humor.*
*Looks around stack of Fan Fic stories*
*Looks at the Merger and The Awesome Brigade, which will probably take a butt load of time to update due to uncertainty as to the direction of the story and the shear amount of plotlines needed to be juggled in order to work.*
DAMN IT! Why can't I ever stick with a story,finish it, and/or not having it of questionable quality!
Very well then good sir, I concede to you on this matter...
But mark my words! One day I shall be able to complete a story that will be of a calibur that rock the very foundations of this site! Or at least the Universe. I can't tell the defintion.
On a more relevant note to your tale, will Blacklight adapt as quickly as he did in THAT OTHER Prototype Fic that shall not be named (mostly because I can't remember it.)
| KafeiDetour chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
Interesting story, I am looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
| He Who See's chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
I like this tale. I like it very much. Alot better than that other Prototype StarCraft tale.
| Kane chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Nice chapter, but is this where the people in Starcraft are escaping from Mar Sara? So does that mean that Raynor and crew are geting Alex Mercer or whoever took his place in this story as back up? It would be quite amusing to see their reactions to his evolutions, also is he going to get some of the old mutations on top of some new Zerg derived ones or is he going to be some how able to intigrate technologie into his abilities or is our new protagonist going to be the field scientist of the Sons of Korhal? Or is he latter going to defect with Raynor and the others or is he going to become part of the Zerg collective but still retain his free will/personality? The posibilities are limitless with this one so I really hope somethin good out of this.
Thats all for now and keep going with your good work, please.
P.S.:Are you going to deviate from the canon story of Starcraft?