Reviews for Defensive
relaxed bluntz chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Good job, but what the fucks a Wilky Bar?
Eagle2 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Great story dude! You described the action and manuevers so well I could picture exactly what was happening, kind of like watching that show "Dogfights' on History Channel. Keep on writing mister.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Well, well, soldier...


A picture-perfect, classic dogfight bewteen the good ol' Phantom and the MiG-21.

Great tactis, great narrative, great flow. Man! That was intense! X_x LOL

N-I-CE work, marine!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Very good. Keep writing