Reviews for Abuse
Nightwhisp chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Update soon please, I;m really curious now
Twinchy chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
Apart from the fact that I don't see Nate as abusive even when drunk, you did a really good job creating the atmosphere of this story. And you are right, for various reasons I don't believe Eliot allowing Nate to beat him up was out of character.

For one, Eliot would rather get his behind kicked than hurt anyone of the team, although they might deserve it. Secondly, he is too much into his own self-punishment in a way to even consider he might not deserve it in the first place.

I was sad to see Eliot, Hardison and Parker draw the line and leave the team but I clearly see why they had to do it and know beyond any doubt it was the right decision in this situation.

Really a tense read. I dearly hope to see more 'Leverage' fanfics from you.
Merthur True Love chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
This was good i liked it.
Strom chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
This was really good! I would love to read more from this story arc if you decide to write more on it!

~Storm :-)
Anon chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
No, just... No. Out of character, everyone, bad writing... Didn't like it. Could have worked, but it didn't. Not enough build, not enough. Just not enough skills to pull off a delicate subject like this.
TvNut Loves Jamie Fraser chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
this has promise for both backstory and a continuation. nice one-shot though.
saides chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
You are a gift!

Thanks, Mercedes