|Reviews for Unrequited|
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/16
Great story. Two things I'm left wondering about. 1) if Edward became close to Carmen like Bella is to James why did there friendship end. He let her be there instead of Bella and said I love you to her so I'm wondering if Edward stopped talking to her because why say I love you if it's not a forever friendship. It felt like Bella wasn't mad enough that Edward let her be there for him. 2) Did Bella remarry? I mean if you love somebody so completely I can't imagine remarrying and losing the last name that your husband and son have. So did her grave say Isabella Cullen or did she remarry. But this was a great story
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 23 . 6/18
What an emotional roller coaster!
Interesting twist on NM.
| breakingdawn57 chapter 22 . 6/6
This story had me on such an emotional rollercoaster constantly( angry, smiling and bawling like a baby from one minute to the next)! So well written and honest! Keep writing and using your gift of words!
| Lil Rix chapter 23 . 5/31
It's been a long time since a story has gotten to me as this one has. I'm really glad I found it, in a way it has helped me release some tension I've felt I had inside me lately. Your story gave me a lot of anticipation on what the next chapter might lead to. Even though it wasn't the ending I was wanting, but it was an ending that suited perfectly. I hope you still have stories that are like this, that keep the reading on edge, can't wait till next time.
| MyladyNancy chapter 23 . 5/15
I agree with every one else. such a good story teller. I don't cry or get too emotional when reading but this last chapter was hard. My heart got all knotted up and I was a bit over whelmed. thank you for sharing your talent.
| EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 4/25
| amsrule chapter 23 . 4/18
back for a reread-what a ride!
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/8
Damn it man. But thanks
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/8
SweetbabyJeysus thank you
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/8
At the part about catching the fish that had already been caught before i really couldn't help but think "how stupid". Though i LOVE ex-lovers getting back together stories sooo much. Really. He just made that fish sound a bit retarded
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/8
| agoogoo chapter 4 . 4/8
i wish B was stronger in that...i wish even tho she was affected she'd be the kinda girl that would still coolly approach Edward, ask how he was (regardless), maybe tell him she's missed him, and that despite it all, glad to see he was happy with someone else and sad to see him sick. Coz...well that's reeeally be a kick in the gut for Edward i think. tho rereading, obviously this is sorta impossible a task
| Bevey99 chapter 23 . 2/26
Holy crap. I read this whole thing off an on all day until it was finished. I little surprised at the epilog but since there was one it was bond to be an emotional one. Brave of you to finished it this way, but he was never going to have a long a happy life. Great story, great writing. Thanks for giving us your words.
| Bevey99 chapter 7 . 2/25
That was confusing. She said ýes' to an open ended question. ?
| Bevey99 chapter 6 . 2/25
It's real shame that you haven't continued to write. This story is very good, with great writing. Pity