Pretty good at the beginning, but as it went on I found some spelling and grammar mistakes. It needs paragraph breaks, too, because one big chunk of writing is hard to read. Not bad description, though.

Heyy:) that was kewl! Update! I love it:DD

this chapter was eally short but i dont mind. a great start :) update sooon

Cool story! hey i thought the character was Thalia... annabeth has the golden locks. just saying, not 2 b rude or anything, i just thought i should let u know b4 other people become rude. write more!

Maybe if you have enough time in between updates u could visit my stories and review! thanks!

Good story!

~AnnabethChase12

P.S. It seems like everybody sucks at summaries these days.. dont worry!