|Reviews for Sparks Fly|
| MadHatterBellatrix10 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
*CLAP CLAP CLAP* I loved this story because I love the song, it is just so perfect about how she would've beeen feeling, i may include this aspect in Blood Rose :) I was wondering who the author was since I skipped to the story and of course it's you Gamma, it couldn't be anyone else writing like this :D
| princesstaranee chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Oh! A dark twist to such a sweet song, but an appropriate one, I think, because Taylor sings about how this boy is so wrong, as Riddle is, and yet oh-so-right. And of course, Bellatrix is madly in love with him!
| Tallen93 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
This was a great story,hope you won the challenge, and I here the song you used once in a blue moon, but now when I do this couple shall hit me and I will finally learn to love the song.
| LoopyandLovely chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Brr. I liked this a lot! And I'm brr'ing (okay that's weird) because I've got cold shivers, in a good way, of course. I love this suggestion of how things started out between Bellatrix and Voldemort and it's very believable. You could see them transitioning from this young and human couple into the older pair where Voldemort is inhumane and Bellatrix madly obsessed. Well done and thanks for entering. The results will be up on the 26th December so keep your eyes open! :)
| TheBitterAftertaste chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Okay AFTER you told me about this fiction in our little messagy messages, I decided I just had to read this one, and I was so exzcited when you put my favourite ever quotes in!
'Drop everything now, meet me in the pouring rain, kiss me on the side walk take away the pain, cause I see sparks fly, whenever I'm with you'
And my favourite one... so uch so I started crying because its the most beautiful, yet simple song lyric I've ever heard
'I'm captivated by you baby, like a firework show'
I LOVE IT!
Well done my little Bible Basher!
Love you! 3 xxxxx
| Amazon Star chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I love it!
| Singing in the Dead of Night chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Wow. I love that song so much, and I was really excited when I saw this story. You put the lyrics of the song into the story, and made it seem very natural. Well done!
| clasch chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Is it just me or is there some Bellamort written by Gamma? :O It's amazing! :) I enjoyed it, a) because it's Bellamort and who doesn't love Bellamort? and b) because it was well written and a very plausible situation! Also, there were no grammar/spelling mistakes that I could find! xD I love you for that. I also like that Bella is attached to Andromeda, or "Andi," and that she kind of turns against her to be more attached to Tommy boy. Liked it! :)
| Rose Garden Fairytale chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
This is amazing! I loved the story and the way you incorporated the lyrics.
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Loving the manipulative Tom...
| permanthiatus chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I review in steps, just to let you know.
First: Let's just the bad stuff away quickly, shall we? I did spot some grammar/spelling mistakes, mostly mistypes, and I would like to point them out.
This is what is written: "Druella daubed at her eyes aain-"
This is what I think you meant: "Druella dabbed at her eyes again-"
"Dabbed (daubed)" is misspelled and "again (aain)" is mistyped.
This is what is written: "-slamming th door behind her."
This is what I think you meant: "-slamming the door behind her."
"The (th)" is mistyped.
This is what is written: "So he was her confidante."
Nothing is misspelled or mistyped with this one, but I would like to point out that "confidante" is defined as "a female confidant". So, unless Tom is secretly a woman, that words is wrongly used.
This is what is written: "His tone registered no surprise at he decision."
This is what I think you meant: "His tone registered no surprise at her decision."
Bellatrix is described as a "he" not a "her". I don't believe this is a misuse of pronouns, rather a mistype where you forgot to add the 'r'.
Second: Admittedly, I'm not a big fan of either Tom Riddle Jr. or Bellatrix. But I got to say, this story made me "aww" quite a lot. I'm a sucker for romance and this story is very adorable!
Third: I like how you didn't make Tom into a gooey-eyed do-gooder as many people do. You keep his charm and his manipulative attitude, which I enjoyed very much. I also like how you added in some of Bellatrix's emotions on losing her sister. I found that softer side of Bellatrix (and the rest of the family) sweet :]
Fourth: You mashed the story and the song together well, even if you didn't use the actual lyrics in the story. I could see the song in the story crystal clear!
Overall: Not a bad story! It was a very pleasant read :] I must say, I feel I'm partially at fault for your mistypes. I reminded all of you too late about the due-date. I had intended to do it in the morning, or at least before 5 o'clock, but time just got away from me. For that, I apologize.
The results will be out soon, once everyone with an extension completes their stories. It shouldn't take any longer than a week.
| Greyella chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
I do love your one-shots! Hmmmm a crafty Dark Lord, now who could imagine that?
| obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Aww poor Bella. Nice job, looking forward to more! :D