Reviews for Not Innocent
Horrified Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
I've seen reviews on here that are saying that Rape is "Hot" or they "like it"

.Heck

Guys, this is messed up. This isn't just rape, but on a rape on a minor too!

Whoever wrote this is Screwed up too.

I have lost faith in humanity
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
WHAT THE F*** IS THIS S***! YOU COULD HAVE AT LEAST PUT A F***ING RAPE WARNING AND RATED THIS PIECE OF S*** M! IF YOUR SO F***ING COMFY WRITING ABOUT THE RAPE OF MINORS,GO GET YOURSELF RAPED! YOU JUST RUINED TWO OF THE AWSOME ANIMES EVER! DO YOU WANT TO SCAR POOR CHILDREN THAT GO ON THIS SITE! YOU SHOULD BE F***ING REPORTED YOU SICK SICK B*****D!
Reldresal chapter 1 . 10/30/2014
Up the Butt Charizard
Shatteredoll chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
What the f$&k did I just read?! This is sick in so many ways!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
What the fuck motivated you to write this you sicko?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
this is sad and people who criticize shut up you read the summary it's your fault you read it and keep going if you didn't like don't take the time to review it readers like you disgust me.
Geisha chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
This is disgusting... You do realize you have just wrote a "story" about a Minor being raped...
You are appalling.
You should put a M rating on this...
As a 13 year old girl I should've have to come across trash like this... in fact, you shouldn't even be writing this!
I have every right to report you!
You sick, messed up pervert!
EliTigre chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Okay... DO YOU MIND PUTTING A FREAKING "M" RATING ON THIS S*** ?! And c'mon, you just murdered Stein's character.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
... You killed it with the rape. Please go and die.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
... wouldn't his guts come out...?
Person chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
For the love of Christ! This needs an M rating dammit! For Pete's sake there are Minors on the site! Dear lord!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Good Mercy of Heaven above! This is horrifying! I can see that the fangirls that are going off on this are probably focusing more on Allen's submissiveness, but I mean, this is just so horribly wrong! He's a fifteen year old kid, and he's getting vivisected and then...and then raped!

I disapprove of this in every single way possible! At least put an 'M' rating on this, dude! There's children on here! And I know, most will read it anyway, but for the ones who don't, please, rate this properly!
What the hell chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
At first, I was morbidly interested about the dissection bit, if Stein could even get away with it before Allen took control and beat the shit out of him.
Instead, I was completely mortified to find that this fanfic had been rated incorrectly and contained sexually explicit material. I mean, what the bloody /hell/? You rated this T with the clear knowledge that you wrote out a sex scene? A RAPE one at that? You cray cray?
And don't even get me started on the people reviewing calling it "hot" and other horrid adjectives to describe such a morally twisted situation. It doesn't matter that this is fiction, you just called the rape of a minor, a young boy, hot - I'd like to see you say that in real life to your parents or rape victims.
Your writing shows that you have writing skill, at the very least. I just wish you'd rate the damn thing correctly rather than tricking younger viewers into reading porn.
prrresoususzzz chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
My precious i need more i say i need more
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
this is messed up. . . . . . . . . I like it :3
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