Reviews for Family First
TinaraXx chapter 6 . 10/20/2011
honestly made me cry. I felt it went too quickly for my liking, but thats just me. maybe slow it down and give it a bit more information about why this is happening, what made them find out ( eg you said their parents car accident) and how bad is it. I like! :)
AsandCastle103 chapter 5 . 10/15/2011
Another amazing chapter. Poor Jo and Jay. Keep it up. :)
AsandCastle103 chapter 4 . 10/14/2011
Another amazing chapter. Keep up the great work. :)
AsandCastle103 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Great start, i hope u continue. :)