|Reviews for A Mistake?|
| Mortal Days chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Plz write another chapter! I will even give you a reivew every day if it will make you do another chapter.
Please, this was really good. Scratch that, it was more than that, it was really, really good.
You got both of their characters so well, and I love Mal's mini montolauge at the end. Also, on a side note, I think you might be missing a question mark or something at the end of the last sentence. I know you have a full stop and all, and I know I'm no grammar expert, but still. I think a question mark would have been more suited for the text.
| AquilaTempestas chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Oh my gosh I absolutely loved the way you made this scene your own by adding more to it : )
I hope you continue this. I love this pairing and I'm eager to see how you develop it.
| lozxtitchx chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Mal can't stay away from Jade because there's something there that's attracting him like a moth to a flame.. this shouldn't just be a one-shot, I hope you'll be posting another chapter soon xx