|Reviews for and she knows|
| Olive Monster chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
I like it, maybe you could continue with it, like when they run away with eachother?...
| sangkar chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
I loved that, it was so sweet and sad and nice. Great job. I always loved Gale/Katniss.
My personal favourite is, of course, the last one. I think it was the only HG fic I've ever read to portray Gale/Katniss really /well/, not just meaningless fluff, or overdone angst. You balanced the two out perfectly.
| Larka Rinna Luna chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
Maybe the only reason I find this funny is because I'm a SW nerd...~ Larka
| just kiss me slowly chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
You know, I've always wondered what Gale thought during the Hunger Games watching Katniss with Peeta. Even though I always had the hardest time imagining it, until I found your story!
| xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
| Syberian Quest chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Reviewer number five again! Ha. I’m on a role. :)
Anyway, you did a good job with your first HG fic. I liked how you divided it all into little sections and sort of had these “stages” of Gale and his feelings for Katniss. That was good. I also enjoyed your emotion. I think you did a pretty good job of getting into Gale’s mind.
A few little things I’m going to be nitpicky about:
“He doesn't bother to look across to the other coffin, where a twelve-year-old Katniss Everdeen is resting her chin on the glass, and obviously thinking the same thing.” The two “tos” put so close together make it feel a bit repetitive. I also think the comma before "obviously" is rather unnecessary.
“He sets snares and other strange contraptions that somehow manage to trap animals that he skins and takes home for his mother to stew.” The “that-that” becomes repetitive, and the sentence feels a bit prolonged because you used it to express so many different things. It would have been better to break it up a bit.
“rabbit-hole” No hyphen.
"We could do it, you know." He says, lost in thought. – The same problem you had with deadly beautiful. “He” should not be capitalized.
“I'm a brother, to you” Again, an unnecessary comma.
"You...you know what you are to me." A space before the second “you” would make it a much cleaner break.
Towards the end, I think it was a bit rushed. Around the “And a little while later” sentence, I just felt like you could have gone on to elaborate a little more. That was almost a skipping over the action sentence. But considering you wrote this in half an hour, you did excellently. And I really like your “and she knows” sentence, especially using it in the summary. It’s almost cruel that Katniss said that, but the idea of rewriting the whole scene from Gale’s perspective is great. Brownie points for originality (especially compared to the rest of the fandom).
In any case, keep writing. I really don’t have anything else to say. Just keep it up. :)
| therockinCookie chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
*sniff* You write so good. I'm jealous. ;)
This was beautiful. But...you ship Gale/Katniss?
If yes, NOOOOOOOO! D:
But everyone has their own opinion. ;)
Cookie :P (Still...Peeta is just so sweet! xD)
| pennilee chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
I love this one, Robin. :D I think this is the best fic you've ever written. 8D
| SaraSj chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
That was so amazing. I loved it. It was short...yet cutting.
I've always loved Gale so very much and...that was painful for me to see :(
That was impressive...so short yet so much emotion packed into it.
| Ellenka chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
Why, I think it IS fantastic :D
Your style is very lovely and you captured Gales side of the story very well. Sniff. My heart broke for him all over again. That said, awesome work ;)