|Reviews for Revelations|
| Darkangle87 chapter 3 . 3h ago
Darn cliff hangers lol. Love this story
| Anon chapter 6 . 10/24/2013
Jerk. When are you going to finish the story? :D Love how you built up the tension!
| Firin chapter 3 . 6/30/2013
Finally figured put it was Thailog huh?
| Lady Augustin chapter 6 . 4/11/2013
Glad to finally see a update, and believe me I'm not disappointed. I do hope to see more frequent updates if possible.
Great Chapter and Update Soon :)
| Lady-night-shade04 chapter 6 . 3/17/2013
Very happy you update and can't wait for the next entry!
| inuXkaglover chapter 5 . 2/17/2012
AHHHH I NEED TO KNOW ABOUT THAILOG AND PUCK! sorry just excited, Please update soon:)
| Jester's Pet Oriole chapter 5 . 2/6/2012
Things Goliath could be missing:
Clan's (Pack, Mutates, Wyvern) death
evil world dominating virus
Brooklyn's time traveling
Good story though! I hope you get to update Revelations soon!
| GoldenDust chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
Fantastic story and beautifully written too! I really love those cliffhangers. Keep up the great work!
| Roccat chapter 4 . 12/21/2011
That was great!
Update soon please
| Lady Augustin chapter 4 . 12/7/2011
Really great chapter, and here I was thinking Thailong might have actually liked Elisa but he wants Puck. Well update soon, nice chapter :)
| Spootzl chapter 4 . 12/6/2011
Okay. First of all - finally! I've been waiting so long for this, finally we get to see Elisa's reaction to a horrifying revelation. I love your style, your ideas and that really dark theme for a G/E fanfic. Of course Thailog would use Elisa to destroy Goliath. She is his biggest weakness.
But the ending... That was extremely unexpected! What a weird twist, what the hell does he want with...? You simply have to post the next chapter as quickly as you can!
PS: A sexy Christmas chapter sounds awesome, I'm looking forward to it. ;)
| sdalrympleelygmail.com chapter 3 . 12/4/2011
Loved the story so far...but who is it? And will she get Goliath in the end, in a sweet sex scene? Can't wait!
| ChicagoKnockout chapter 3 . 11/29/2011
I knew it, it has to be Thailog! This is sure to complicate matters...update soon!
| Eleonore Lenoir chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Great story! Please, update soon! :)
| chichi chapter 3 . 10/21/2011
wow! you make it hot in . this is incledibly good. please continue.