Reviews for Come fly with me
lovaboy chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
wow - i cant believe I loved a story with Bella in it (Im usually strictly E/J) but that was so hot! Would love to see more chapters in this fic. Thanks!
itlnbrt chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Loved it.
Butterfly Betty chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Wow, that was amazing, and I'd love to see more of it! Great job:)
twimama77 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Very hot
caressa28 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Wow this would make a great chapter story. Thx for posting.
Plain J chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Great Job! For English not being your first language, you write really good! Hell, your stories are easier for me to read than a lot of the people whose first language is English. Keep up the great work! I enjoy reading your stuff!
Soulmate Ficwriter chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Loved this! It was so hot and sweet! Are you continuing it after the vontest?
dragontattoo75 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I really like this! I think you write E/J/B smut scenes very well. And there was a little bit plot in there too :)

Good luck in the contest!

Thanks for writing and sharing!
Galveston's Daughter chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Like it - Just how kinky is Jasper?
SarahAH30 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I loved it honey.

You really do write your threesomes well.

I've said it before and I'll say it again, to say English isn't your first language you do a great job.

I'm not usually one for ploy stories but I do love how you write E/B/J.

Well done honey and good luck with the contest.
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