Reviews for Preventing the Future
gottabekiddinme chapter 13 . 4/19/2012
I wish I'd thought of the mini Roman army...
cosmoGirl666 chapter 13 . 4/19/2012
Yay! Good chapter! :)
vienne la nuit chapter 12 . 4/17/2012
good morning m1untainc1imber,

your story is still as delightful and refreshing as it was in the first few chapters. i still really like that Hermione isn't getting romantically involved with anybody. you emphasize her independence, are portraying a character who reunites the traits of all houses in herself, this way making her more intriguing. she stands a bit out but doesn't need other's acceptance (harry and ron) or rejection (pureblooded prejudice) to define her or find her own way in the world (this kind of independence on her part sadly sometimes lacked in canon).

i don't know where you want to take the storyline or her character, but there is one thing -if i may- that might make her more 'believable'. show her darker side too (or more). because at the end she is a slytherin too, fought in a war for years long, her childhood, innocence was robbed, must have seen unimaginable things... you said in this chapter she would have smiled if she could have remembered how to. show more of this, let her zone out, think about losses, have nightmares, getting into conflicts with other students. what about the future death eaters that must be at the school now? how is dumbls keeping an eye on her? is he arranging 'friends' in gryffindor to spy on her? what about the other teachers? i know you want her to keep a low profile, but it would be really interesting to see her interact with bellatrix or somebody equally dark.

look, i'm rambling! i'm sorry, just as you can see i really am hooked and can't wait for your next update!

thank you for posting!

have fun writing and have a nice day.
Moixxx chapter 12 . 4/15/2012
Yay another chapter!
MultiNinja2012 chapter 12 . 4/15/2012
Great chapter. I thourghly enjoyed Hermione and Lily's interaction, especially the end part as that is something I imagine that Hermione would do. I cannot wait for interaction with Snape and Pettigrew. I thought of another question: Is Hermione going to go and see the Sorting Hat again? I loved their conversations from earlier. I will now attempt to await your next chapter with some patience.
bloodoftheenemy chapter 9 . 4/14/2012
I meant to say for the chapter 12 review that lily's reaction to hermionels revelation was unrealistic and anticliamtic but other wise is was a good chapter and I'm looking forward to the reast of it.
bloodoftheenemy chapter 12 . 4/14/2012
I did not like lily's reaction. I feel like if somebody told her the were from the future with no concrete evidence and she just accepts it, no questions asked?
MultiNinja2012 chapter 11 . 4/14/2012
A well put together story. Love the concept of the Founders Hall. But I am wondering whether we will ever find out what the Founders letters say and what was in that Book she ignored?
Moixxx chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
I love Hermione in this! Please update soon!
L00ve-Joanna chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
Okay, I just want to say that you. are. brilliant. Like, seriously. I just LOVE this story so much right now, and I'm definitely gonna look forward to every time you update this story. I love a LOT of fanfictions, but this one seriously sticks out for me. PLEASE update again soon. (;
Ellen2607 chapter 11 . 4/13/2012
this story is awseome! please update soon!

bloodoftheenemy chapter 11 . 4/12/2012
is this one of those stories that, hermione simply being in this time it changes everything? Like, is it just me or is anyone else getting a feeling that james, sirius, and remus and peter aren't actually the marauders this time around?

anyway, great chapter. I really love your writing style.
YouAreNowEnteringTheVoid chapter 11 . 4/12/2012
Hey, great job with this next chapter! I got the feeling it was more of a filler than to really further the plot, but I still enjoyed it. I can't wait for some funnier scenes with the marauders and the poltergeists. I am slightly confused about the marauder situation though. Are they the marauders? If not, who are the marauders? Why does nobody know? I know you probably won't answer those, because they'll be a part of the plot later in the story, but it still felt good to get those questions out there. Keep writing!

Samiam chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
Wow, I am enjoying this story, I am trying to puzzle out how it will all turn out...
Mia chapter 10 . 4/12/2012
I swear! Your story is soooo bloody awesome! More more! Update sooooon pls!
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