Reviews for Evil
SakuraFan chapter 1 . 1/18
That was a really good story!
Loreechan chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Crazycally chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
That was unusual and cute
Angela chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Lmaooo so funny! I love this story
Showdown chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
I'm not trying to flame you so please don't get story you should work on making more detailed sentences and expanding sentences as well as description so that the reader knows what going on. As well as where the characters are, you should also stop repeating phrases that are not really necessary for emphasis I'm pretty sure you will eventually get it.