Reviews for The Unexpected Visitor
ariesrobin chapter 4 . 10/28/2011
I think I may have cracked a rib laughing! Nice job.
ariesrobin chapter 4 . 10/28/2011
I think I may have cracked a rib laughing! Nice job.
Duchess67 chapter 4 . 10/27/2011
Wait, you're not giving even an illogical reason for how the gator got the zip ties AND the rope of it's mouth! Ripping up the upholstery and going out the window I can see though. LOL
Duchess67 chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
*giggle* Ohhhh, it's going to be one of THOSE mornings, is it? Poor Michael and Fiona!

Wait, how did such a large gator get in through the fence anyway? *curious*
Duchess67 chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
*snicker* That was sooooo Fiona-like. Well done! *vbg*
coolaquariun chapter 4 . 10/14/2011
There are somethings that even a super spy and his team cannot fix all by themselves. That was super fun story!
storyfan101 chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
Ha ha! I knew that gator would have to visit with Maddie at some point! That was a very cute story. Thanks for sharing.
purdys pal chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
This was so funny, and original. I absolutely loved it, looking forward to reading more from you.
DaisyDay chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
This really was such an entertaining story, I was smiling throughout. Thanks for the mention, although I just remembered saying it was perfect and to post it. Hope to see more humorous story from you, although you can write drama so well, too!
DaisyDay chapter 3 . 10/13/2011
This story is great, I don't know how I fell behind in reading it. Love Mike and Sam's interaction. Now on to the completion (already?)
PSU93Girl chapter 3 . 10/13/2011
Cute story, but it could use an editor, especially when you have people speaking.

Looking forward to the final chapter though!
Jedi Skysinger chapter 3 . 10/12/2011
I love it! LOL. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
bcmom chapter 3 . 10/12/2011
LOL. More please.
purdys pal chapter 3 . 10/12/2011
Ooooh I thought Fi might be getting her Alligator shoes and a handbag when the Gator started chomping on the Charger.
purdys pal chapter 2 . 10/12/2011
A Gator in the back of the Charger, cannot be a good thing. And they're going to take it to visit Maddy? Definitely a bad idea.
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