Reviews for Cigarettes and Confrontations
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
It's alright. However, here some constructive criticism. If you want this story to stand out and be people's favourites and re reads them this is what you need to do:
Step 1: add more detail into Edwards reaction and hatred to her smoking
Step 2: go through Bellas withdrawal symptoms
Step 3: a possible re lapse
Step 5: Bella secretly smoking and is caught by Edward
Step 6: Edward and his family surveills what Bella does
Step 7: she finally quits for good

This would be a better story instead if it being a mediocre one shot with no substance (no offence). Good luck with improvements!
Love ya!
TwilightFreak143 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
I always wondered what would happen if Bella started drinking and smoking when Edward left, and what his reaction would be. While I have yet to find a drinking story, I enjoyed this one, and wished it was longer.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I think this is a really good story you should so other chapters on how bella quits smoking and the withdrawls type symptoms she may have she could secretly smoke and he finds her again things like that. It would be so intereating and captivating to read!
nepalipranshu chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
The Constant Wanderer chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Nice. But I can understand her. I'm a smoker and it does feel good.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
good one. smoking is really stuped!
NN chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
god job! i really like it :D
Lionnara chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
aww that was nice and sweet one shot.
chet-ice chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
good one-shot! never heard of a smooky-Bella before haahha! thanks!
EmpressHimiko chapter 1 . 10/9/2011