Reviews for Demons of Konohagakure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely badass story! Thanks so much for an absolutely amazing story! |
![]() ![]() I fill like naruto is crating his own species WIle recreating the Uzumaki and namikaze clan |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay wtf that "Torture scene" was weak as fuck! wasn't even a torture scene just a school yard beat down, it didn't need no warning lmao I'm all excited thinking he gonna pull out Sasuke eye or pill off his nails shit maybe skin him Alive but no you give a warning sign for his arms being dislocated, after all that shit he just does that, weak weak weak freaking weak! Arthurs like you are the worst |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, he just ripped the ropes AFTER their kid died? That's stupid af. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good story...though the one thing ive noticed is that you dont like doing over time relationships and arent comfortable writing them. even in newer fics like COTS you can see it as naruto and kushina started seeing eachother in a relationship type of way way too fast. Id say to either bring down the harem size and make the characters get to know eachother more or just dont do it. I already forgot half the lovers considering how fast they fell for him. other than relationships, this story and your others are pretty well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know the author is for some reason obssessed wiht kiba and the inuzuka.. but why force them into this type of story..? there is no chance in hell they would agree to destroy konoha. wtf man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hell yeah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the things I hate the most about bashing fics. The most nonsensical people who should be killed get insane plot armor, and keep on coming back again and again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If I was them, what I'd do is kill sasuke and the council while disguised as Iwa/Kumo ninja to start a war so that konoha gets invaded again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Since the shadow clone is just an academy technique in this fic instead of a jonin level jutsu, how come Yagura doesn't know about it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How does Sakura have enough chakra for a shadow clone? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fox tail is alright, but the fox ears just makes him a laughing stock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The shadow clones jutsu is a B-rank jonin level technique. The basic clone jutsu that Naruto sucks at is E-rank. |