Reviews for Path of the Fox
S. S. Shadow chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
Story is starting to become interesting, can't wait for more. In regards to the harem pairings, I do think Fu would be a viable option, I assume as a demon container she may have grown up with some if not most of the problems Naruto did growing up so I think they could really bond as a result. I've never seen her in the anime despite the Hero's Water mini-arc and only recently has pics of her shown, but from the decent fics I've read involving her she seems like the type who could pull off ether the tomboy act or the Tsundere-type. The following is the glossary definition of said term as presented at the end of E.S. Simeon's Bleach fic 'Tug Out the Deredere'

(1) Tsundere – Japanese term that generally describes a character who has an outward personality that is cold and seemingly unfriendly. However, the inside personality may be emotional and serious in certain situations. It is formed by combing tow separate words, tsuntsun (The seemingly hostile side and unfriendly side), and deredere (The love struck or emotion side). Another feature that a Tsundere may have is a pair of pigtails, which Hiyori does have. It should be noted that for Hiyori specifically, her deredere side is unknown to be either in a romantic way or just plain lonely.

However, Hiyori's status as a Tsundere is still unclear in Bleach right now, but this is a fanfic with the possibility of idea, so that's how it is in the story. For more solid examples of Tsunderes in other anime/manga series, look at Kyou from Clannad, Kagami from Lucky Star, or even Rukia.

(2) Tsurime - A type of eye-design for anime/manga characters where the corners of the eyes are pointing up. Hiyori has eyes just like that, yet another common characteristic of Tsunderes.

As for other possible selections, I'd consider perhaps staying away from the older woman/cougar angle, at least for now. Perhaps once you start the relationships you might have an older woman temporarily involved to perhaps 'show him the ropes' but on the who maybe stick with girls withinfive or so years of him, make it easier for him to identify with them. I suppose that's about all I can provide for now but keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon. :)
Nemo2002 chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
nice one...can't wait to see the meeting between Naruto, Kirabi and Yugito...should be fun to read :)
Zamoskis chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
A very good story so far, i hope you update soon; as for the girls i vote for mei and i am interested to see your other oc
OregonDucks chapter 2 . 10/31/2011
Naruto's Harem in Path of the Fox Konan, Mei, Anko, Koyuki, and Yugao.
Storylover213 chapter 4 . 10/31/2011
i pick Fu and the OC
Kitsune95 chapter 4 . 10/31/2011
great chapter! can't wait for the next!
Joao brasileiro chapter 3 . 10/31/2011
amazing fic mann, keep up the excelent work,xD, waiting for the next chapter.
bgreenwivy chapter 3 . 10/30/2011
Oh this is getting interesting. I am enjoying your take on this so far. I like how you have Naruto's neechan and sort of mirrored what happened in the anime but put your own spin on it.
Tocka e chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
This was nice:-) can't wait till asuma, Hiruzen and all the others find out about naruto being alive. Feel kinda sorry for them being in the dark...

Keep up the good work~!
Kitsune95 chapter 2 . 10/15/2011
awesome story and chapter, however i find it hard to beivle that the HOKAGE couldn't find any tracks! if he'd made it to look like he didn't, but then sent the 4 jounin after naruto, and after intergating ur OC, have them agree to train Naruto, but also allow Naruto to send letters to Jiji. please update soon!
Volos chapter 2 . 10/14/2011
Seems like kakashi and all his jonin friend(gai,kurenai,asuma,anko)possibly more will be leaving konoha once they find out naruto is infact alive. If they find out naruto is alive and is in kumo im pretty sure they wouldnt want naruto to live in a place that was suppose to be home where they treated him like trash. They would mostly likely leave and join kumo causing konoha to get weaker which Rakki said.
Culaio chapter 2 . 10/14/2011
interesting story, but there are some mistakes/plot holes for example:

-naruto was born with whiskers instead of gegting when kyubi was sealed, with could mean that in some twisted way kyubi is also naruto's parent.

-uzumaki were better at fuinjutsu than minato since they could seal whole kyubi and he could only half(kushina teached him unique uzumaki fuinjutsu), so naruto should inherited fuinjutsu talent from mother side of family, not from father.

-biju's CAN be killed we know that from manga

-biju DOESN'T have to be sealed inside children, minato sealed kyubi in naruto for "greater good"(and political reasons), yes he was BAD father :(

for bad english
RogueNya chapter 2 . 10/13/2011
I am surprised that the Sarutobi did not tell who his parents were but suppose it would ruin the plot at this stage in time. Anyways this is an interesting story, look forward to seeing what happens next.
tstoldt chapter 2 . 10/13/2011
Found this today it looks kick ass please keep up the good work and update often one quick question is he going to be paired with someone from konaha or kumo
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