Reviews for Moonlight WaterZone
246vili chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
...Meanwhile in Heavens...
Jiraya has been watching everything from the Heavens and couldn't help but cry.
"I am sooo proud of him. He truly did surpass his master. " TT
Sudenly Kushina appears with curiosity on her face. "Hey Jiraya, what are you looking at to cry... like... that?" O,O "Is that my little Naruto?"
"That's right Kushina. My student is making me very proud." The next thing he felt is an inhumanly strong grip on his neck.
"SO YOU'RE TELLING ME YOU TURNED MY INNOCENT LITTLE BABY INTO A PLAYBOY WITH YOUR PERVERT TEACHINGS?! I'M GOING TO TORTURE YOU FOR AN ETERNITY FOR THAT!"
"Nooooo!"

XD XD XD
Sorry, but I couldn't miss this little "sequel". It was begging me in my head to write it down.

The Lemon was very good, just like in some of your other stories I read so far.
OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
HOT!
Williamgbirkin chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Type your review here...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
love it
PrincessT123 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Uck, no offense but I hate threesomes XD

And I probably shouldn't have read this since it was a threesome pairing..

But I thought the third person was a guy at first so...

LOL

and Naruto is so not a perv ;{

But other than that, great job. Your writing is still awesome :)
ChaosMagemon chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
Samui and Hinata make for a perfect tag team for this kind of thing
Pyromania101 chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Nice birthday present for Naruto. I guess this was an okay lemon, as both women were hot, and you clearly like Hinata, which puts you up a notch in my book. This seems like a stereotype lemon one-shot, but it was a great one nonetheless. Thanks for telling me about it. Bye!
Stargategod chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
damn this was a awesome story smaui and hinata it doesnt get much better than that was you break past hinata's shy shell she a bad girl
El Frijolero chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Hahah nice story
swords of dawn chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I always wanted to see this pairing! Glad someone thought of it! :)
swords of twilight chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
First time I ever saw a NarutoxHinataxSamui. I like it.
NaruHinaFanboy chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Woohoo, this lemon is freakin' hot dude! I love it very much and its definitely a special lemon one-shot of NarutoxHinataxSamui since u released this on his Birthday. I'm really looking forward to the lemon threesome between Naruto, Samui and Hotaru as well as the two new Blondes in Bed entries that you're working on. Keep writing these delicious and awesome lemons Raptor because u are definitely one of the best lemon writers that I have on this website. _
Kage Bijuu chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Now this is what I called a very good masterpiece of a lemon that for sure.
dbtiger63 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Very well done and a great fantasy scene with two of the hottest kunoichis in the land!

Thanks

DB
bankai777 chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
i bet that both jiraiya,minato namikaze and kushina are happy that naruto is happy to have 2 powerful and sexy kunoichi's who truly love jiraiya he would be writing a icha icha book based on their love life while kushina is giving him a nasty beatdown for even considering it.
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