|Reviews for At First Brightness|
| Rosemary-Lilly-Allium chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
"The end of the universe was a little creature crawling out of the evolutionary ooze" What a unique idea
(That sounds like I mean it sarcastically, but I don't.)
| GuesssWho chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
I like it. And the footnote was very Douglas Adams :D
| Foxsword chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Creative. And I'm really glad you're writing Doctor Who fanfics. :D
The sentence "The end of the universe was a little creature crawling out of the evolutionary ooze..." is very good. That's what I'm going to remember about this piece.
The event you've chosen offers endless possibilities! Explore them. :)
| Stormsworder chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Aaaah, quite intriguing. The Master was always one of my favorite characters in New Who, and it's intriguing that you put it from his child self's point of view. it seemed rather confusing with the future mentioning of what happened at the end of series 3, but that's the fun of Doctor Who :p Time is a big ball of wibbley wobbley timey wimey stuff.
| iamajammydodger chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
This is a really good story, you've got the narrative down well. :) keep writing! *cyber thumbs up*