Reviews for To Walk A Mile In someone else's Shoes
mcepl chapter 19 . 10/13/2020
DH, chapter 37, “The Elder Wand”:
blockquotepThe air around them had frozen: Harry’s breath caught and solidified in his chest. Shapes moved out in the darkness, swirling figures of concentrated blackness, moving in a great wave toward the castle, their faces hooded and their breath rattling. …/p
pRon and Hermione closed in beside him as the sounds of fighting behind them grew suddenly muted, deadened, because a silence only dementors could bring was falling thickly through the night, and Fred was gone, and Hagrid was surely dying or already dead. …/p
p“Come on, Harry!” said Hermione’s voice from a very long way away. “Patronuses, Harry, come on!”/p
pHe raised his wand, but a dull hopelessness was spreading through him: How many more lay dead that he did not yet know about; he felt as though his soul had already half left his body. …/p
p“HARRY, COME ON!” screamed Hermione./p
pA hundred dementors were advancing, gliding toward them, sucking their way closer to Harry’s despair, which was like a promise of a feast. …/p
pHe saw Ron’s silver terrier burst into the air, flicker feebly, and expire; he saw Hermione’s otter twist in midair and fade; and his own wand trembled in his hand, and he almost welcomed the oncoming oblivion, the promise of nothing, of no feeling. …/p
pAnd then a silver hare, a boar, and a fox soared past Harry, Ron, and Hermione’s heads: The dementors fell back before the creatures’ approach. Three more people had arrived out of the darkness to stand beside them, their wands outstretched, continuing to cast their Patronuses: Luna, Ernie, and Seamus./p
p“That’s right,” said Luna encouragingly, as if they were back in the Room of Requirement and this was simply spell practice for the D.A. “That’s right, Harry … come on, think of something happy. …”/p
p“Something happy?” he said, his voice cracked./p
p“We’re all still here,” she whispered, “we’re still fighting. Come on, now. …”/p
pThere was a silver spark, then a wavering light, and then, with the greatest effort it had ever cost him, the stag burst from the end of Harry’s wand. It cantered forward, and now the dementors scattered in earnest, and immediately the night was mild again, but the sounds of the surrounding battle were loud in his ears./p
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Neville certainly could produce the corporeal Patronus even during The Battle of Hogwarts.
44Hoagy44 chapter 21 . 7/1/2020
I know it’s 7 years after you last edited this and almost a decades since you started but is there any chance that this story will continue or is it destined to join the others in the forgotten pile, I love your story and the basis around it thank you if you even read this
Guest chapter 5 . 1/27/2020
something about this fic is just super hard to read.
watchwhathappensnext chapter 21 . 9/15/2019
WHERES CHAPTER 22 I'M DYING HERE
Singard chapter 21 . 9/8/2019
I hope you come back to this story eventually.
Corwyn chapter 21 . 8/8/2019
I'm enjoying this story so far, and look forward to it continuing. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2019
Please update this, i absolutely love this and it nothing has mzde me wish Hogwarts was real more that thjs because being a transgender woman would be the absolute best if i could use this method to become a girl. Everything about this is grade A and i wanna read more
Guest chapter 21 . 12/8/2018
Hi, this story hasn’t been updated since 2013 but if you read this I hope you can continue it if you are still active. I really enjoyed it and am intrigued about the rest of the story. So maybe you hear this a lot but please continue I need to know what happens.
amyrlinengineer chapter 21 . 10/6/2018
I love this story. I've now read it twice, actually. I think the biggest thing I'm hung up on though is if Ron and Hermione's animagus forms are going to shift with them when they swap places again. I'd be sad if they're stuck with mismatched forms. haha. thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 21 . 9/30/2018
What's happening next please finish
Ttto chapter 21 . 2/4/2018
Good stuff be cool if it was finnised.
icypika chapter 21 . 1/25/2018
Great work as always.
Aftermath Man chapter 8 . 8/8/2017
I really tried to read this and take it seriously but the story strains credulity and is far to fantastic even for a story based on a fantasy series. There is such a thing as being too perfect and this is observed repeatedly; other issues are the constant redundancy of much that is discussed and reflected on and repeated two or three lines later to pad the story. I choose to cease reading now before everyone becomes ridiculously overpowered and changes gender and doing so saddens me greatly as the premised was rather interesting.
Guest chapter 21 . 6/28/2017
You should finish this, this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read. It almost sounds like and actual hp book. You are a great writer and should consider writing your own books. Please finish this
cm125905 chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
Can you please write more it is so bloody amazing. Your a good writer
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