Reviews for The Promotion
cleona1010 chapter 10 . 10/15
I think when continuing the story, you should have some kind of major event, like there's a celebration and some entertainers come in and, BOOM, big event brings the two closer, maybe have Charlotte kidnapped from the event along with Gwen and a few other people. And then have to knights come to save them, but end up getting captured as well, and somehow Charlotte saves them but with the price of her almost dying.
Guest chapter 11 . 10/6
What a beautiful story! I read this in one sitting, and am anxious for the next update. Don't give up on it!
TheTombedSpirit chapter 10 . 5/16
I hope so! Good luck!
orcafan1 chapter 10 . 1/20
Love this story!
twilightalex1 chapter 10 . 12/24/2014
Please please please update! I love Percival, he is probably my favourite knight and I can never seem to find many good fanfics about him but this one is good and I can't wait until you update! Please do soon!
unlogicalfangirl chapter 10 . 11/22/2014
OMGODS I love this piece of writing!DONT forget about it! Please! It's written greatly and u absolutey need to continue. U don't even have an option. It's decided. You WILL continue
Peace-n'-Luv-4601 chapter 10 . 11/4/2014
UPDATE! Please!
Spirited Mare chapter 10 . 3/30/2014
Great chapter! The childish part of me that loves soppy romance wants Charlotte to suck it and accept her feelings, but really I know you're doing the right thing. I think it will make the story a lot more realistic. After all, she's a servant and he's a knight- she should find it hard to believe.

I've loved your story since te stet and I'm so glad you're deciding to continue it. You had me worried for a while before your two recent updates! As always, the qualities great and the chapter was fun to read.

Keep it coming!:)
duchess123 chapter 10 . 3/30/2014
Awesome! They are so cute together! :) hopefully you will update sooner
ForeverTeamEdward13 chapter 9 . 2/24/2014
Aww poor thing! Good chapter! Please update again soon!
Maddie Tess chapter 8 . 1/27/2014
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS I LOVE THE STORY AND THE CHARACTERS SO MUCH! There aren't many good Percival/OC stories at all and yours is truly a stand out please please please continue! If you need any help at all contact me!
IdaRose89 chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
Please continue writing...I'm hooked! I love where it is going. You couldn't have left it on a more evil cliff hanger!
Maybe it will be a slow process? He needs to prove that it can work. But Percival needs a happy ending, no dying!
ThatAwkwardKidInTheBack chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
I would hope that you complete the story! :) An unfinished work can be so depressing, you know. ;) I enjoyed it when I first read it, and plan on rereading when I acquire more time.
Spirited Mare chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
You have to continue this story, its far too good to be dropped!

I loved the original, so I have no improvements in the sense of overall style to suggest. One thing id particularly like you to continue to do, though, is keep the romance realistic and not rush it.

As for the plot? Its always hard to think of ideas, I find they attack me of their own accord, normally when im too busy to write them down! One thing that you could explore, is her friemdship with Merlin growing, until the point where shes's trusted enough, and needed (due to her duties to the knights and horses) enough to accomoany them on a hunt, or somrthing? Just a quick idea I had;)

If you ever need help, encoragement, or ideas please just PM me, it'd be my pleasure to help you coninue this great fic.

I hope you are able to continue it!
Shehunter chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
Yes, you have to continue this story! Currently I'm having no ideas as to recommendations, but I will let you know as soon as I think of one, but don't stop writing! There are too few Percival stories out there!
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