Reviews for Gerry's diary
CountryMustBeCountryWide chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I'm really interested to see where you go with this. I think it could be AMAZING. I'd really like to know what he actually wrote on some pages. I think you should continue writing it :D
ItsRafaelbm chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Hey, very nice text! I loved really, but one sentence that I will change using the progressive form will be that one:

"she started to laugh about things Gerry wrote", like "She started laughing about the things Gerry wrote".

Thank you dear!
Camila Almeida chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Very nice story, you are so creative!
feandrioli chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Nice story! You can add any end, this story is always going to be beautiful, I really liked it.

Here are some grammar points that I think you should correct:

You wrote: She got curious to see what is writing inside of it. I think it should be "what was written".

You wrote It was Gerry diary and it should be "Gerry's diary".

You wrote: how did they met each other and it should be "how they met each other", since it's not a question.

The story is great! :)