Reviews for Who Am I To Say
Wow chapter 8 . 8/9
Your story is amazing. It has a very interesting story going. I like how you add some of the past every chapter so we are slowly learning what happened in the past and what's happening in the present. I'm wondering what Ash's secret is. Keep up the good work! If you ever decide to pick this back up...whick I really hope you do but if you don't, you did a very good job so far.
C.Jye chapter 8 . 9/28/2014
Just started playing the game a week ago, got curious if there were any fanfics for this game, and I did not expect to find this gem. I know it's been a while since you updated this story, but I would still like to tell you that I love how much detail you put into building the atmosphere of a scene and the characters emotions, and I hope you'll pick this up again someday.
CAPJHMPAgirl chapter 8 . 7/26/2014
Cute story! I'm super curious to know what Ash's secret is. I noticed that there haven't been any updates in a while. I definitely understand that life can get in the way of writing, but I hope you will pick this back up one day. It's really good! I love Violet's attempts at cooking. She has real dedication. I also love the way you're introducing the Harvest Goddess. :) Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this and hope to see more.
you are a star chapter 8 . 12/31/2012
oh my gosh
i just
wow i started playing this game a few days ago and fell in love and now i fell in love with your story

hopefully university isn't swamping you too bad! thank you for this wow update when you can!
RK chapter 8 . 9/5/2012
Screw them! I dont care if you update in 5 months, I will wait without complain.
pocketcucco chapter 8 . 9/2/2012
jeez Yoru-chan update faster! I'm so angry that I have to wait! Nah just kidding, take things at your own pace. :D I'm loving your characterizations and little backstories for everyone a lot. I especially like reading about Cam and Ash's friendship, especially now that someone's starting to come between them. What could Ash's secret be olololol ohoho
zoey chapter 8 . 9/2/2012
Your a good writer. You just don't put that much time in it. Try working a little on free weekends and holidays.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/23/2012
Wow, what a twist. Please continue
zoey chapter 7 . 7/17/2012
You haven't reviewed in forevs... I'm dropping the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
That's IT. Prepare to be hurt. Girl you need to get your ass in gear.
I know you have collage but your last update was 6 months ago. You better believe it.
yuki no usagi chapter 7 . 6/2/2012
PLEASE! continue this story i really really love it! please {begging in teary eye}! i already have the game and the male characters that i love the most is ash and cam so please continue this chapter
XxCandiigrlszxX chapter 7 . 5/26/2012
I honestly can't decide when it comes to Ash and Cam. Poor Cam. : o_o; I hope Ash isn't dead. LOL
andIJDC chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
ugh just when I've finally set my heart on Ash you go and throw Hiro into the mix with his cute little remark about being intimidate a fly and my heart wavers and now I think even Cam is starting to grow on me... You are good woman... maybe too good... _
andIJDC chapter 3 . 5/24/2012
aaawe I am so rooting for Ash/Violet, he's just too tease-able! XD

and your descriptions are very good of both the characters and scenery
andIJDC chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
awe a very sweet and funny chapter- I like it, can't wait to get started on the rest

I really like the way you portrayed both Ash's and Violet's, I'm a bit iffy on Cam's extremely shy personality though
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