|Reviews for Pride of Time|
| Leremia C. Awan chapter 1 . 9/27
Afuckingmazing. Good job, it was very enjoyable and you know I like that HEA shit.
| amyrlinengineer chapter 50 . 9/23
This story was amazing. I basically spent the whole weekend don't nothing but reading it non stop. I particularly enjoyed how you portrayed the childishness of some of Harry's actions when viewed through the eyes of Hermione the adult. Great love story. I'm sure I'll read it again at some point in the future. Thank you for sharing with us.
| darkwitch57 chapter 50 . 9/21
Wow...just...wow. I’m incredibly amazed. This story was so great! It kept me hooked the whole time! I honestly could t wait to get home from work everyday to read it! I know that if I could have read it all in one sitting, I would have because I loved it so much! Your characters were phenomenal, the plot was great, and I love all that you adapted and changed from canon. I CANT TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVED THIS STORY! IF YOU LOVE FICS WITH SNAPE, READ THIS! Bravo, fellow Potterhead, bravo!
| Lillypad1412 chapter 50 . 9/21
This was amazing... I don’t know what else to say.
| LumosLyra chapter 50 . 9/3
I've spent days reading this epic. It is absolutely phenomenal. It was riveting, emotional, and so plausible. It's going down as one of my favorites of all time. Absolutely stunning work.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19
“How to find a copy of Five Winters:” ...and nothing. Brilliantly done, hiding behind the Invisibility cloak? Come back and tell us, dammit! And write too! Miss that! At least come back and finish your WIPs and tell us where to find Five Winters!
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/18
I love you Anubis
| ObsidianCobblestone chapter 14 . 8/19
aah it's 4:30 am... anyway, I haven't been this engrossed in hp time travel ff in a while. Thank you :)
| Zavod chapter 23 . 8/8
So, I'm half way through and I'm going to stop reading.
I'm going to try to be mostly non-spoilery here...
This is a me thing. The story hasn't met my expectations.
Specifically, I continually felt that the potential of the time travel story was not being exercised. There were many times that felt that Hermione's knowledge of the future should have been addressed, and it was ignored, in favour of more talk about the protagonist's relationship.
more spoilery now...
The most recent chapter shows me that the author is not a parent, because the handling of the baby's growing up and where it looks like that "person" is going is unfathomable, from my perspective. Why write a child into the story only to (REDACTED for spoilers)? The kid hasn't even had a line of dialog yet! It's not a character, it's an hiccup for the main characters.
And the reason I'm stopping...
Year one is almost over and Hermione has (from the audience's perspective) not even observed her younger self and her oft-proclaimed best friends. We've only heard that Severus hates them. I'm sorry, but we know that. What we don't know is how older Hermione will see them (that would be interesting).
My wife has finished the story and couldn't tell me if any important developments that I could look forward to. (although she tells me the alternate version of the story is fun)
My sense is that the author had specific ideas in mind from the beginning, and strained to not deviate from that goal. Personally, there were several places I thought the story could have expanded on some ideas that we presented, but they waved at me as the opportunity passed, unaddressed.
So, if you read the first several chapters (after the going back in time) and you love it, by all means, keep reading. The writing is good. If you like the age-appropriate SS/HG idea then this is your story. But if you're hoping for Hermione to give any thought to the nature or effect of time travel, or to try to improve things with her knowledge, there are at l many (many!) other stories that do that, this one does not.
| CaliforniaCougar chapter 11 . 7/30
that kiss tho *fans self*
| SunnydayToday chapter 11 . 7/24
que the fangirl squealing: they kissed!
| hiareportsyou chapter 50 . 7/21
did... did you just end on Finite Incantem? Jesus that's amazing.
| rhiilily chapter 50 . 7/20
Do yourself a favour and read this!
Theres so much i want to say but i honestly feel a little speechless
So just thank you
| Vicky-xxxx chapter 50 . 7/4
This is probably one of the best if not the very best fic i’ve ever read. The plot and the depth of the characters is unparalelled. I’ve probably read this story about ten times already. Please tell me you’re still writing! Thank you so so much for this amazing work.
| Hetc chapter 9 . 6/28
'You pick up new spells like a toadstool does water' - lovely.
I can imagine my gran saying this.