Reviews for Pride of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter! Looking forward to seeing how their relationship progresses.. And how they’ll be as professors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So curious to see what will happen next year! Also what Snapes future holds... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter! I’m really enjoying Hermiones interactions with everyone |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes Hermione! Taking down Sirius a peg or two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow things look dim. Glad folks are surviving, but hard to believe at this point that it could get resolved in a positive way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Filled with a lot of action, for sure. I'm glad that Draco is loyal to his young friend... and Dobby is doing his thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good POV on events. Both personal and relating to the bigger picture. The interesting thing is that most pure bloods don't have a regular or socialized education/youth - so it stands that there will be some that will continue to prefer customized, individual education. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Some very interesting and intense plot points here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, oh, oh. Somewhat unexpected as it played out. Could have use a little more physical positioning details, but got the gist of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Regarding Selenius - I'm thinking Andromeda Tonks may be a good bet. But you may have another solution in mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, yes, but will she be able to do anything about it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was harder to follow - visually - and scene to scene as they left for the ministry. I liked the thestrals and Luna - I didn't like that you weren't interested in changing the Sirius plot point - only reflecting on it with additional characters. The reflection with your version of Hermoine and the sprog were very nice, but not what I came to the story for. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the "new ground" and AU plot points. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good alternate plot points and variations. |